At 3 o’clock, Pie Corbett paced down long field manor. “It’s a full moon, it’s a full moon.” He heard a voice mutter. As the clouds shifted the full moon could be seen. The man in front of Pie started to shake and somehow he turned into a red-eyed, hungry fully grown werewolf.
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Hi Bobby, thank you for adding your story. I chuckled at the mention of Pie but I think you could improve it by using “show don’t tell”. By that, Pie means that you should describe what is happening but leave it up to the reader’s imagination. Instead of telling us that he turned into a werewolf, describe the transformation.
Sorry but I could do better soon hopefully on this report
Nice work bobby!