3 Responses to “The werewolf by Bobby”

  1. Hi Bobby, thank you for adding your story. I chuckled at the mention of Pie but I think you could improve it by using “show don’t tell”. By that, Pie means that you should describe what is happening but leave it up to the reader’s imagination. Instead of telling us that he turned into a werewolf, describe the transformation.

  2. Nice work bobby!

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