3 Responses to “Where do you get your ideas? By Lilly”

  1. hi lily
    1. i really like the line burning candle.
    2. where did you get the idea from?
    3. can you change it like this a burning candles smoke drifting into your heart. your amazing keep up with the hard work.

  2. I really liked how your rhymed it.
    How did you come up with the words.
    I really liked how your rhymed it then came up with another word and then you rhymed that.

  3. I like this because it rymes

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