2 Responses to “Sofia’s monsterous adventure”

  1. This is a brilliant descriptive story setting. I was on edge the whole time. I really wanted to see what happened next. I really wished that it wasn’t only a few lines long.

  2. Excellent story opener Sofia, I really want to know what’s going to happen next! Where have the dragons appeared from I wonder? Remember to use a comma when writing your expanded noun phrases..huge, ugly dragons.

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