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Stargrazer

Stargrazer

 

Sandra and Alex were having fun eating healthy food in their hammocks onboard the skyship. They had set their ship to autopilot so they could relax. Suddenly, a giant scary dragon pounced on top of the balloon. Without warning, it tried to attack Alex but it missed him. Trying to defend himself, Alex attacked the dragon.At that moment, the dragon fell over the edge of the skyship. Realising that the balloon had been damaged by the dragon’s sharp claws, Sadra landed the skyship in the dirty ground below.   

One Response to “Stargrazer”

  1. You set the scene so nicely. I like your work. Could you include a sentence to describe how Alex attacks the dragon? Please check your spelling of Sandra in the final sentence. Great stuff, keep writing.

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