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Sky ship

Suddenly, the sky ship started falling from great height! Ty gripped the steering wheel in his hands, as if it could get them out of this trouble. They crashed out onto the grass below, dazed after falling. They saw a gloomy, dark forest looking as spooky as Halloween, Marina wasn’t sure what to do so she gripped Ty’s hand in fear. 

 

They heard the long screech of a night owl, calling for its partner. The hiss of a snake, that sounded like it was nearby, Ty shook in his boots and Marina clenched even tighter, like she was squeezing TY’s hand off. 

 

The wind howled through the trees, Ty had never noticed the wind like this, it brought the boggy smell from the creepy woods towards them. He had to put his shirt over his mouth like a mask. 

 

As quick as a flash, two beady, red eyes stared at the siblings, Marina tried to scream, but nothing came out!

One Response to “Sky ship”

  1. This is a nice piece of descriptive writing. Do you think some of the sentences could have been reworded a little?
    I enjoyed reading it.

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