Airship
As we safely landed it stared to snow really
hard when it came down on the crass it was
thick when me and Ted walk we both fell
over. Then we got to some cave we sat
down and i had some food that i got
last minut before we jumed out of
the airship.
I thought that your story was very gripping and has a very good story line. I enjoyed reading it!!! What type of food are you eating in the cave? Make sure to check your punctuation and spelling as I noticed a few mistakes.