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Attack of the Goobren

The ship came down with with a hellish screech as it skidded along in a gravel clearing, the only obvious place to land in the gloomy abandoned looking city. In every direction a maze of high walls jagged like sharks teeth, everything shrouded in a heavy blanket of fog. Jaydon feels the temperature plummet as he surveys the landscape with his trusty googlees binoculars,  searching for signs of life and imminent danger.

2 Responses to “Attack of the Goobren”

  1. Wow! I love all the detailed description. You’ve really created an ominous atmosphere.

  2. They nice Oscar you have lots good ideas

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