how to train a pheonix
How to Look After a Pet Phoenix …
Have you ever looked after an exotic pet ? If so this is a guide to help you .This mythical creature is always female and they are normally found in a special area called the Mystical Emporium . It is a popular place to purchase these amazing animals. You can buy a baby phoenix egg for just £5.00 and when you say you will keep it safe they would actually sell it for half price .
However – it can be a little tricky to handle a phoenix . If you don’t follow the instructions the phoenix will grow up as a ferocious beast .
What do you do ?You should :
First, you will need to let it sniff you so it can like you .
Next, you feed it some catfish or some other fish because it might vomit .
Then, you make it a sleep and make sure it is nice and warm .
After that, you need to feed it again when it wakes up .
Then finally, you play with it daily by a ball or a tennis ball
Remember you should be nice to it .
Some mini tips …
Tip 1 : you should give it lots of love
Tip 2 : make sure it likes you as you are its mother .
Tip 3 : do whatever it needs and then it will grow so amazing .
If they have a habit of sleeping you should go out and let it be active because sometimes they would snore louder than a pig’s noise .If they do not like their sleeping area just make a cosy den like a dragon , pretty cool right .
The final thingI should tell you is that they can hide away from you
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WWW:I like that you added some mini tips.
EBI: There is so much space between each paragraph so next time delete them.
i liked how you added a lot of detail of what to do with it and more paragraphs
you could improve by fixing some of the sentences, some of them don’t make sense