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The landing of the Sky ship

After the sky ship crashed to the ground in the middle of the day,Ruby saw a big scary looking dragon as tall as the BFG, The huge dragon came stomping towards her.Ruby didn’t know what to do she was in the middle of nowhere, there was just mountains and dark caves around her. All of a sudden a loud roar came echoing from the mountains and the ground beneath her was shaking. Ruby started to run as fast as she could the dragon wasn’t far behind her. Suddenly Ruby tripped over a rock and before she new it she was in a dark cave she could see nothing but grey clouds not even a glimpse of the bright sun, it was as if she was dreaming but no, this was actually real. Ruby felt sick she was stuck. She felt as if she was being hung upside down!

2 Responses to “The landing of the Sky ship”

  1. Well done Sophie. I really like this bit because you used a simile really effectly After the sky ship crashed to the ground in the middle of the day,Ruby saw a big scary looking dragon as tall as the BFG, Next time try to use pronouns instead of repeating Ruby’s name.

  2. I like your simile as tall as the BFG. This story is amazing.

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