The ominous blizzard dragon episode 2

Finally, a green healthy land. They didn’t know what it was called but they entered regardlessly. However, Tommy didn’t think it was a good idea to enter this mysterious land. At that moment, Marie saw some gloomy smoke in the distance slithering towards them. Tommy just noticed what it was . It was a blizzard dragon coming their way. Marie’s dad showed them the way underneath the wet grassy land , above  where they were earlier. Marie’s dad was staying outside with a bloody spiky sword  standing like a flamingo sleeping.

Marie ran to grab her dad. With a grip, Marie pulled her dad to where all of the others were standing worrying about what will happen to them. Marie’s dad said “why did you do that I was going to stab the beast like you did last time when that happened. Marie said that was because I had the biggest and better sword like you did just did not, and it’s gone now it broke when I freed it out of my hands. But then Marie thought for a second she ran out of the area she was at. The blizzard dragon nearly wrecked everything in site! Then with a glimpse the blizzard dragon saw Marie and used its blood shot eyes to scare here away but it didn’t work. Marie was fearless. What would happen to her next?














One Response to “The ominous blizzard dragon episode 2”

  1. Very good vocabulary, also a good choice for a cliffhanger.

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