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The Skyship Adventure

The skyship Adventure 

Without Warning, the ship lifted and began to go. The plane shook rapidly and off we were. Out of the blue, a cloudy bright sky occurred but then minutes later a down pour came. I grabbed the railing, my knuckles turned white. Frost made my finger and toes rust. We sailed through an enchanted neverland.  

  

2 Responses to “The Skyship Adventure”

  1. Really good paragraph
    Check your punctuation

  2. Very good
    Have you thought about adding an animal no one else has thought of?

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