The sound

Ty and Mariana looked at each other across the weathered deck, Mariana slowly raised her finger to her lips having heard an unbearable screeching sound in the distance. Next to Ty was a cocked crossbow, loaded with an arrow as sharp as a scalpel, and ready for action. The silver moon peeked from behind the cloud onto tense scene below it. Tension grew around them as they waited impatiently for the sound again when out of nowhere Ty took a mighty blow…

One Response to “The sound”

  1. Great work. Why was Ty loaded with a bow and arrow? Maybe you could an explanation mark.

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