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What i cherrish matters the most-By Ayman

I’ve  never seen i a shark in real life but I have seen two beautiful goldfish.

I’ve never been to the moon but I’ve been to the  natural history museum.

I have never had a honking cockatiel but I do have a screeching budgie as a pet.

I’ve never been to Australia but i have been to Yemen.

I have never done sats yet but  i have finished this assignment

One Response to “What i cherrish matters the most-By Ayman”

  1. This is very good and i like the contrasts in the sentences. On the last sentence I think it needs a full stop . Maybe you could add some more description in sentence four.

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