2 Responses to “Unicorn sentences”

  1. Well done. This a good bit of writing.
    I really like how it is inventive and different.
    How you read it through and checked how it reads as some bits don’t exactly make sense.
    To make it even better, instead of using amazing twice you could use fabulous or excellent.

  2. john-hallsville primary school May 24, 2021 at 2:17 pm

    I love how it describes its eyes and what it looks like and how it feels

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