Chapter 2 The Mysterious Emporium

Chapter 2 – A warning Disobeyed


“My name is Armin swift, “he said happily. Armin showed River around. Armin first took River to his favourite old toys he always used to play with his friends when his dad ran the shop. Armin always used to crawl into a den he made in the shop when he was a kid. “Why did you never open the door?” River asked curiously. “I never opened the door because…’’ he stopped and the two fell silent.  

One Response to “Chapter 2 The Mysterious Emporium”

  1. 1. Well done.
    2. Why is it called that?
    3. Maybe make it a bit longer ?

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