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Chapter 1 the leaving

Later that day, the whole world fell sillent. Later that day, the whole world changed. Later that day, something dropped from the sky like a led balloon. It looked like the letter. The letter that changed everything. So Derrick and Jim thought about opening the letter and they decided to open it to get it out of there way. They also read it and inside it read. To Jim and Derrick danger is on its way the Satan will be here tomorrow at 12 am you must find safety and fast because he is not on his own Mr oak owl.

After reading the letter they decided  to pack up in the morning as soon as they wake up. All day they thought about the letter and thought it was a joke well Derrick did. Jim was panicking all day and just did whatever Derrick did for safety. Derrick had a normal day and didn’t worry about the letter until that night.

That night Derrick nor Jim could could sleep because of the letter. So they decided to pack up ready for in the morning. They packed guinnipig food, 8 bottles of water, tophats, suits, and tap dancing shoes. They didn’t go  because they needed sleep. The next morning they woke up at 6:45 and then had there breakfast. After that it was 7:30  when they set off to the forest but what they didn’t know was that the trees talked and moved.

One Response to “Chapter 1 the leaving”

  1. I like how you have used a simile dropped like a led balloon. Next time I think you could describe how to letter got here a bit more. Where do they have to get to?

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