Blog

Cool Can ok Coca Cola by Harry

In the land of Neverbelieve, I drank from a cool can of coca cola as fizzy as a volcano bubbling with lava.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw massive mountains as tall as trees standing still in a forest.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I felt water as cold as snow falling from white clouds high in the sky.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I came across a cute cat curled up on a comfy couch.

In the land of Neverbelieve, I slept in a bad bed which was broken.

2 Responses to “Cool Can ok Coca Cola by Harry”

  1. I think that the smiles and alliteration is really good part because it gives it texture

  2. I think that your first Poem is a really good part because it’s about your title and you have allatratation why did you call it Coca Cola and to make this even better you could use more similes.

Please leave a comment. Remember, say something positive; ask a question; suggest an improvement.

%d bloggers like this: