I want to paint…

I want to paint the smell of a freshly baked double chocolate cookie  still steaming hot with fumes of chocolate and cookie dough soft

and crunchy ling on a plate to be ate.

I want to paint the sound of  soothing song of black Birds song on a summer morning.

I want to paint the memory of Flashing lights red and green Christmas Day.

I want to paint the taste of delicious , drizziling coffee cake.

2 Responses to “I want to paint…”

  1. Phoebe-Forest Academy October 4, 2021 at 12:19 pm

    I like your description of the chocolate-chip cookie.Have you ever baked a cookie?Maybe you could describe how the coffee cake tastes.

  2. Alfie Forest Academy October 4, 2021 at 12:23 pm

    I like how you described the cookie in many different ways.Where did you come up with the soothing songs of the blackbird?I think you could improve the ling.

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