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I want to paint…

I want to paint my favourite foods

luscious green lettuce red ripe strawberry’s and sizzling bacon.

I want to paint smell of chocolate chip cookies in the oven.

I want to paint the image of world war 2

I want to paint the warriors and tanks Battling

I want to paint a Ferrari that roars like a furious lion

I want to paint the end of this poem.

One Response to “I want to paint…”

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    Esme - forest academy October 4, 2021 at 12:20 pm

    I liked the last bit of your poem, also i like how its about different things i think your improvement you need is something else for ripe and something else for the title instead of i want to paint…
    you could do for ripe…
    ripened
    juicy
    ready
    full-flavoured

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