One Response to “Painting”

  1. Thomas-Forest Academy October 4, 2021 at 12:18 pm

    I like how you say I want to paint the sound of a dragon’s shimmering scales.
    Why do you want to paint the smell of horse’s hay and grass?
    I think that you could change your tittle to The dragon’s shimmery scales

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