What I’d love to paint
I want to paint …
the owl hooting in the moonlight with the moon glimmering on the silky soft as white as snow .
the scent of the petroleum’s petal wafting through a wonderful window .
the sound of horses hooves clopping up a homey hill as quietly as a silent whisper.
I want to paint …
the smell of coffee in the white wanted kitchen.
the touch of snow on a white cold day .
the sound of a wolf howling in the moonlight like a deep growl.
I want to paint …
the children laughing and playing in the playground.
the soft slow of my mum sneezing inside of my room.
the dads laugh chuckling in the sunset with a faint laugh in the distens.
I want to paint the end of the day.
I think that the eighth one is really good because you have put a lot of detail in it and it is very interesting verse.
To make this even better,you could put more description in it.
I really like your line about the wolf howling.To make this even better you could add more description on some lines.What is your favourite line?