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What is a planets

What is easly losed? My mum eathball geting stuck in a box.

What is hot? the sun covered by fire.

What is round? saturn with a big ring around it.

What is big? the eath covered in places.

What is small? pluto as small as a ant.

What is brite? the sun as brite as a limp.

What is cold? In eath there is antarnica.

11 Responses to “What is a planets”

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    Year 5 Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:34 pm

    We liked your description of the planets – how did you choose your vocabulary?

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    Kacie Eaves Primary School 5 October 12, 2021 at 1:38 pm

    Why did you use them planets?

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    Anonymous October 12, 2021 at 1:39 pm

    I loved it when you wrote that the sun is covered in fire it sounded amazing!

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    Lily and Benjamin- Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:39 pm

    I like the way you have put in alliteration and similes.

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    Lucas Y5 Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:41 pm

    I loved the sun covered by fire. And how did you get that vocabulary

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    Rowan October 12, 2021 at 1:42 pm

    I loved it when you wrote the sun is as bright as a lamp because of how you described how bright it was.

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    Jessica & Scarlett - Y5 Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:43 pm

    I really liked the similes – they really did go with the poem.

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    Bethany-Eaves Primary School Year 5 October 12, 2021 at 1:46 pm

    This is amazing! How did you do it and good English.

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    Lucas Y5 Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:46 pm

    I loved the what is round because Saturn is my fav planet and I also loved the vocabulary.

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    Amelia and Emily Eaves Primary School October 12, 2021 at 1:49 pm

    I really like your vocabulary – I like all the planets and places you have added

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    Ruby and Evie y5 Eaves Primary school October 12, 2021 at 1:51 pm

    I like your description of this poem.

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