Everlasting Orchid

Everlasting Orchid


My petals are like                

The wood of a

Palm tree sticking out like 

The sun. My pollen is just 

Like mini acorns in autumn 

Breeze. The stem is as green as 

Cats eyes and rough 

Wood surrounds my

Roots like a blanket.

My roots are like crunched leaves in 

Autumn’s day and they’re as tall as a skyscraper.


Stourport Primary

One Response to “Everlasting Orchid”

  1. Well done, Isabella. You have created some interesting imagery here. I like the idea of the rough wood being like a blanket around the roots.

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