Blazingstartrees watch weary travelers 

from over the horizon

Just like a ruthless bird of prey.

There chocolate brown roots

 have  a touch of blazing red

Like the scales of a dragon.

Its starry branches

 sing melodious melodies 

To the other trees 

As the moon starts to rise.

The trunk stood its ground


from potential hazards 

Like a mix between a deathly dragon and a starry storm.

The leaves a emerald green 

Floating like a calm collective griffin.


One Response to “Blazingstartree”

  1. This is really beautiful. The only two things is that you could have used something else than melodious melodies, and you also used starry twice. But actually it was really good!

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