2 Responses to “Hell tree”

  1. This a great piece of writing with brilliant descriptions. I loved the bit when you described it like an army in war. Though I think you could have changed it a bit when you said : fresh like freshly cut grass.

  2. i like your descriptive language
    What made you think of these ideas?
    I think you could improve by changing the last sentence e.g. like rude evil demons that came from the core of the sun.

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