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5 Responses to “Harrison and Rocco sky ship Adventure”

  1. Evie Newton Tony February 17, 2022 at 1:12 pm

    I like it because it said the lakes and rivers were frozen. I think to make it better make it longer.

  2. I liked how you described the surroundings. Where did you get the names from? Maybe you could say what clothes they put on.

  3. Yes, make it longer.
    I would maybe suggest more information and details.
    Tell me about the characters

  4. I would very much like to see a lot more sequels to this

  5. Well done make it longer.

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