Character description

The lightning struck the sail tore apart .  The boys legs shivered and trembled as he looked for place to keep cover.    Ty whose hair blew in the wind he at the classes  sail was ripping . The boys whose eyes where brown he looked he looked for help from his crew.  Ty was could as ice he looked for his crew for a blanket.  Ty’s whose cloths blew in the wind, the poor boy was hoping for help from his crew.

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