The Chickenmander
You have probably been to Cheerie on sea and tasted the delicious ice cream on the beach but you have 100% not been to Eerie on sea trust me don’t go there. Some people call her the Eerie monster but her real name is the Chickenmander. No one comes here in the Winter just because of her. No one has ever seen her so it could be a myth.
I like your post, it’s very nice. What would happen next, would the eerie monster come out in the summer one day? Haha, but I would love to say that you have some missing punctuation here and there