The snowman melts

One day a group of kids made a snowman and then later that night it came to life.Than the snowman started wondering about he didn’t know what to do then the kids that made him came back the next day and put carrot for a nose and chocolate chips for its eyes and for the buttons they sed chocolate buttons.The little kids didn’t know he was alive then they found out he was and they said snowman follow us inside its nice and warm in there and there is food you can eat and then the snowman followed them in and then he started to melt.

One Response to “The snowman melts”

  1. I love the idea that the snowman comes to life secretly. How did the children feel when they found out he was alive? Don’t forget to check your punctuation.

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