A mouse’s food notice
To owner of this house,
I am here to write a complaint about the lack of decent food in your house such as cheese, caviar and that cream cheese you had a week ago. I don’t want anything like steak, ribs, marshmallows or bread. I suggest you get better food or I will leave your house forever! I will give you 2 days to get better food.
Notice: don’t get a cat or I’ll get all my friends to take down the beast! If you get a dog I will get every mouse in the country to make it leave!
Hello! I really liked your piece of writing.
1. I love the words you used.
2. Do you like your writing?
3. Maybe just read your writing again because the part when you said “I’m leaving if you don’t-”
I think they would like the mouse to leave.
Hi I really like how you did this writing in first person. From Poppy