One Response to “Mouse in my house”

  1. Well done! Could you add more drama to it? When it says next add a comma and don’t just go plain like I ate them and it was very disgusting go bigger and better like I picked the tiniest piece and ate it. I spat it out and in disgust stamped on it.

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