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The Emporium

The magic Emporium

 

Prologue 

 

Have you noticed that there is a odd looking shop in the town?

And when you go past fireworks go off but its magically quiet,the display has sweets and a pile of teddy’s like a pyramid.For some reason birds fly around it in the morning but the really cool thing is that the bricks sparkle in the night.

 

Grace really wanted to investigate so se walked up to the window.On the window was a jar of chocolate with marshmallows with bunny’s next to each other.

 

And Grace went in…

 

Chapter 1

 

She looked around the room it was so beautiful so many colours.

Grace saw a bowl of sweets it made her mouth water.She told herself “Maybe i could  have at least 2”.Grace heard a weird noise “Hello young girl””Um Hi…”The Man went,she thought about leaving but she didn’t.

 

Grace thought about asking what this place is but she didn’t bother.She was scared but happy she confused herself.

 

Grace went to explore more she saw dolls teddy’s and cars EVERYTHING!She thought to herself”i guess it’s not so bad after all”.

 

Chapter 2

 

While Grace was wondering around the Emporium she spotted a owl flying across the room and landed on top of a book!Grace wondered ”what an earth is a owl doing her” Grace looks sound the room for a moment or two,then she goes over to the book.”This does not look like a normal book to me!”

 

“Don’t touch that book!!” Shouted Mr Silver.Running towards Grace.Going away from the book She asked “why can’t i touch the book?” she wondered Grace went and hid under a table.

 

Despite she got told not to touch it she wanted to anyway Grace went up to the book and touched it.

 

Gets teleported…

 

“WOAH””This is so cool.”Grace goes for a wonder.She sees a gingerbread house with a chocolate fountain going into the river with marshmallows as rocks.”This is the best thing ever!”

 

Around her she saw: cotton candy trees,grace took a peace of cotton candy and tasted it she thought it was yummy.Grace thought it’s best not to have anymore or i’ll have a sugarush,we don’t want that.Grace heard a weird noice and spotted a bird a chocolate bird.

 

Chapter 3

 

There was a fountain with a flower daisy chain around it;it was beautiful.Grace started to realise there was a garden so she went in it.There was a tree swing next to the pond  and on the tree was birds chirping and singing  beautifully.Grace got a little hungry so she went to go get food fro the kitchen.

 

She went through the door leading to the hall way.It went pitch black,

Grace heard a scraping noise Grace gets a bit nervy…She looks around her and nothing was there.Grace saw something blue with blood on it.It starts walking towards her.”aha””There is a table i can hide under”.Grace was hidden for now but she decides to get out from her hiding spot.

 

She runs to the garden door walst the creature was following her she goes through the little hatch in the gate and runs through the forest.

 

Grace tries looking for the door,but she couldn’t find it but then she saw  bright purple door it was the exact same as the one she entered through”hah””Bye bye beast!”She tries going through the door but it doesn’t let her.”Huh why wont it let me through?!””NOOOOOO!!”

Chapter 4

“Huh wait what NO no no no no no no NO! This can’t be happening Grace looks around and Spotts a pool she decided to jump in she holds her breath and swims down to the bright light.She goes through and it worked.

“Well well was it fun Grace?” “Yes you could say that” iI think it would be better if i go it was nice seeing you!” Well goodbye be warned the story hasn’t finished .

Grace leaves in shock from what happend.She returns worried if something bad might happen.

What will happen next?

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