A sky- high animal awaits .
hundreds of spots glisten in the sun
Big footsteps trail behind
The neck was as tall as the sky.
The eyes were as astonishing as
the moon taking over
the sun.
The sun- dried hooves were
as weak as a feather.
So quiet you could hear the air passing by .
Stood their
staring into the deep galaxy.
Eyes clos faster than you can think.
As its feet clench deeper into the
ground.
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This is a great description of an animal! It’s interesting how you described its appearance, including its hundreds of spots, tall neck, and astonishing eyes, which are compared to the moon taking over the sun. The weak sun-dried hooves and the sound of air passing by add to the animal’s majesty and mystery. Overall, this is a very well-written piece!