How many bones must you masticate in one day? Which shall be your favourite?
Why is your soft, silky coat of fur so thick?
Where is your favourite place to saunter?
What is your favourite meat to eat, chicken or beef?
How much sprinting do you do a day?
Who is your most favourite person to bark at?
-What I like: The poem presents a series of questions about the terrier, each exploring a different aspect of the dog’s life and habits.
-What could be improved: The use of more imaginative language could make the poem more engaging and vivid.
-Question for the author: What inspired you to write this poem about a terrier and what do you hope to convey through it?
Amazing poem! I just think you have the word ‘favourite’ too many times. Maybe have ‘best’ instead