Snazzy nan
Today I just found out that my own granny is super Nan!
I didn’t know, how did I not know this, why didn’t my own granny tell me this fantastic information?
I already loved my Nan but I love her even more, she is such a cool nan now. I just thought she was the ordinary loving and caring nan but no she is now the coolest nan ever.
O.M.G can she-, would she? “Granny!” I said. “Yes Rebecca?” she replied back, “Can you take me out on one of your fantastic super Nan adventures?”
There was a sudden silence-
Brilliant work Rebecca. Lively and great sense of the scene.
I enjoyed reading your short snazzy paragraph. Maybe use a thesaurus so you don’t use the word nan so much. Great writing.
I loved the imagination used in this piece of writing but I would’ve loved it to carry on just a bit longer to see what would happen next.
I loved how much you used your imagination!