The creepy school

Hardly daring to breath , charlie ran into the creepy abandoned school. At the moment, she heard a chair screech of the floor within the abandoned school petrified ,  she sneak   to the  nearest wall behind to hide carefully she turned on the flash light  and stone it into the darkest searching  for whatever had made that noise t screech the chair over the floor shivering she sneaked behind a wooding  box . Outside the piping hot weather was burning like a volcano.

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