Suspense paragraph

It was nearly here. I grabbed my book, torch and the last pieces of bread in my cupboard. I could hear it coming closer. It sounded like a range of things:waves crashing against the cliffs ;a herd of wild beasts stampeding. Suddenly the house descended down; nothing could be seen. Then I saw it. As I closed my eyes I soon reached the/long distance bottom of the ocean.

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