I need to pack a range of supplies: food, a sword and shield, torches, and a horse.I hope these necessities will become helpful later on. As I start to approach to the steaming river, I could hear something.The water sounded like a range of things:Like a sizzling piece of bacon;a storm approaching; and a roar of a monster.Wait.A roar of a monster?Think…Grab your sword!As I looked for the monster, some mist cleared;There was a shadow. A far-reaching monster lurched towards me.

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  1. Brilliant effort, Ethan. I think you covered pretty much every type of punctuation that we covered. The only thing I can’t spot are brackets! Don’t forget to use the spacebar to leave a character space after your punctuation. Well done!

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