Writing WPS

Dark clouds smothered the sky, the wind howled. It was impossible to hear each other. The once sparkling sea turned dark and grey. Everyone was shrieking for help. Ava came out of the car. The wind pulled and dragged her into the sea Ellie her friend came out to she bring her bag with her just in case , she heard a scream it was Ava she was to far away to bring back she ran to the other side But she fell…

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