The Island of Joy
On the island of Joy,
I felt a warm hug,
from the Sea of Meditation.
On the island of Joy,
i found a cherry-flower,
night-mocker and a midnight-screamer
floating in the pond of peace.
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Hi Hindi, I love your poem, though i do wish it was a few verses longer. The idea of a warm hug from the Sea of Meditation is a great image. I also like your use of kennings. I’m wondering if a midnight screamer is a fox? I am not sure what a night-mocker is though.