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chapter three that was close!!

Chapter 3: I should run!!!

 

As they both looked at each other in silence they screamed… Theo ran. “Get back here” he said 

“No”,”never”

“You will pay for this!”

Hopefully not he thought, he kept on running,out the door and up the hill Through the forest, through the Bushes and greenery.

 

After he crossed this monstrosity of the forest he finally got out the other side. His home. Just as he left it, beds were made, Pool clean , and Living room tidy. The light was coming through the gaps in the Leaves from the trees, a beautiful sight, almost hypnotic, the grass cut,  the washing drying nicely on the line and his favorite deck chair out on the lawn and a  table with a empty bottle of juice. “MUM!” He screamed, “this nice man gave me 19 packs of fun snaps for free!” 

“Really!”

“Yep and a packet of zingys!”

“Wow,its your lucky day then!” 

He rushed to his room to put them in his stash. “ That was close” he whispered.

The spirit emporiom

Chapter 3.

 

The black spirit pulled her back up to stop her falling.This spirit was originally sitting in a curled up ball in the corner watching as she fell with loving blue eyes instead of the blood red eyes.She pulled Crimson to safety but not for long for the old lady Greta found her with a spirit… “ You… You need to get out of here for what i am about to do is something you will not want to see” Greta pulled out a dagger from her pocket and got ready to stab her… “ NO!” she exclaimed as she grabbed the dagger and threw it down the cliff into the grey sea bellow. “She is the spirit who saved me from falling off that cliff! I will NOT let you kill her !” “ She has orders to obey and she did not obey them, she should have stopped you from getting in the room but instead she watched you as you walked in the room!!!” Then suddenly Greta grabbed Crimson and grabbed the spirit who saved her and pulled them both off the ground by their hair… Greta’s eyes turned a deep purple, her hair turned red, her fingers long and bony and she lifted of the ground leaving Crimson and the spirit dangling of the edge of the cliff  she was about to drop them when the spirit turned red …

Chapter 2: Desisions

Chapter three: Decisions

 

Cedric ran around the emporium trying his hardest to find the shopkeeper, but he was nowhere to be seen. Relentlessly, Cedric decided to go home and hope that the shopkeeper would have returned the next morning. When Cedric returned the next morning the shopkeeper was sitting at his desk, writing in the book of wonders. “Now Daniel. I need to ask you something? Will you be my apprentice?” This took Cedric by surprise! One second his head was inside his book and then he was asking him to be his apprentice. “Cedric, if you say yes then you will be able to travel the world back in time and into the future. But if you say no then you will be left with your filthy muggle, foster parents. What do you say. 

 

Through the door

Chapter 3- Through the door!

 

In the distance, Pete could see a small, but pretty, cottage with holly covered all over it. Then he went into the cottage, and he saw a black, picture. Suddenly, a  silhouette came right up behind him and tapped Pete’s shoulders and shoved him to the floor and sprinted away so Pete didn’t see him. 

 

When the silhouette had gone, Pete said, “hello, is anyone there?” his voice echoed around the whole cottage. Then Pete ran out of the cottage but the thing that he did not know was that someone was following him out. He went to the other children again and all of them started chasing him…

Through the door

Through the door

 

In the shack held all of John’s dreams: an apple computer with two monitors, a captains bed and his very own underground base with military equipment.As well as that there were 2 pugs, 7 fish and a turtle. When John approached the kitchen he was bewildered. There was his family! When John was young he got separated from his family. He got put on the street and that is why he is not scared of anything. Everything but one thing. Losing his family forever. But when he went closer he realised it was just a hologram.

 

“Hello?” said John. All he heard was a gust of wind. He was expecting a person or at least something. He went into the living room, only a tv and a chair. He went to the bathroom, only a toilet and a sink. Then Wagna crashed through the window, his beak open as big as a lion’s and his claws thrashed at John. John ran out of the house and to the door. But it was not there.

Chapter 3:The hut by Laurence

As she entered she heard the sound of the birds chirping and the sun glistening Upon the water and the cave was a home with many animals. As she went down the path some of the trees about her had sun seeping through them. 

Inside the hut there were many chairs around a big long table. There was a small kitchen filled with tea cups And pictures that seemed to have only scenery in them. Food was in the oven and sandwiches and plates out on the table. As she went upstairs she found three rooms each with neatly folded blankets and comfy beds.

Inside the bedrooms there were trinkets the size and shape And the room had a sense of familiarity with her.         

Through the window she could see a beautiful garden and the hill behind With daisies like a blanket of white snow across it.  

But as she  started to feel safe and felt love for the hut. Something you change theory that she was being watched fell upon her. She did not like it. She headed for the front door and then heard it. A creek came behind her.A man in a mask and  black approached her. She hand 2 option: run or scream. She ran…

Chapter 3:The hut by Laurence

As she entered she heard the sound of the birds chirping and the sun glistening Upon the water and the cave was a home with many animals. As she went down the path some of the trees about her had sun seeping through them. 

 

Inside the hut there were many chairs around a big long table. There was a small kitchen filled with tea cups And pictures that seemed to have only scenery in them. Food was in the oven and sandwiches and plates out on the table. As she went upstairs she found three rooms each with neatly folded blankets and comfy beds.

Inside the bedrooms there were trinkets the size and shape And the room had a sense of familiarity with her.         

 

Through the window she could see a beautiful garden and the hill behind With daisies like a blanket of white snow across it.  

 

But as she  started to feel safe and felt love for the hut. Something you change theory that she was being watched fell upon her. She did not like it. She headed for the front door and then heard it. A creek came behind her.A man in a mask and  black approached her. She hand 2 option: run or scream. She ran…

Chapter 3: The Mysterious Inkey Figure by Harry

Chapter 3: The Mysterious Inkey Figure

 

As Jimmy dashed to the house he noticed that there was a forest. He decided to go to the house first. He yanked the door.

“Locked,” said Jimmy with disappointment. So he searched the forest. A couple hours later Jimmy was tempted to leave the room but he was not going to give up; he was determined to find a key for the house. Suddenly he spotted something in his peripheral vision; it was a box in the river. He rolled up his sleeve and plunged his hand in the water. He managed to get the box but he suddenly got bit by something he didn’t think it was anything though he opened the box and in it was a key he immediately ran to the house and put the key in the keyhole.

“Please work please work please work” beeged Jimmy. It opened and he entered and it was empty. He heard creaking coming from upstairs. He didn’t want to look up there but he did. He saw something inkey and it turned towards him. Jimmy ran back down the stairs and went to the door but it wasn’t there. He hid. He didn’t know what to do.

Chapter 3:The hut by Laurence

As she entered she heard the sound of the birds chirping and the sun glistening Upon the water and the cave was a home with many animals. As she went down the path some of the trees about her had sun seeping through them. 

 

Inside the hut there were many chairs around a big long table. There was a small kitchen filled with tea cups And pictures that seemed to have only scenery in them. Food was in the oven and sandwiches and plates out on the table. As she went upstairs she found three rooms each with neatly folded blankets and comfy beds.

Inside the bedrooms there were trinkets the size and shape And the room had a sense of familiarity with her.         

 

Through the window she could see a beautiful garden and the hill behind With daisies like a blanket of white snow across it.  

 

But as she  started to feel safe and felt love for the hut. Something you change theory that she was being watched fell upon her. She did not like it. She headed for the front door and then heard it. A creek came behind her.A man in a mask and  black approached her. She hand 2 option: run or scream. She ran…

The everything emporium- by frankie

Chapter 3 – Is this really happening.

 

It was her father, was this really happening! Her dad was in front of her. She could see him! As quickly as possible, she ran to give him a big hug, but the problem was…she went right through him…Was she a ghost? Could he see her? “Hello dad,” she shouted “Can you see me!” she began tearing, soon tears were pouring out of her eyes…Her dad who she had longed to see forever, couldn’t see her. She felt sick at the thought that her dad could see her. She was surrounded by trees. It felt like they were caving in on her, she didn’t know that they actually were… Suddenly, a noise came out from the bushes. A monkey-like figure started chasing Libertina. Libertina jumped up, screamed then fled… As she was running, she tripped. The monkey creature came up on top of her and growled…Was she going to get eaten, or was she going to live?