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Chapter 2 of lockheart Benjamin SWW

Chapter 2

Brakenheights stood abandoned. Anxiously, Thor stared up to his parents room but there was no familiar light burning. Outside, icicles hung from the crooked trees. Frozen leaves glided along the ground. Weeping willows lined the driveway. Outside, ivy suffocated the house. Thor yanked the keys from his pocket but the key was not in that pocket. So he pulled the keys from the other pocket. Gingerly, he put the bronze key into the oak door. Pushing the key into the keyhole, it opened. Inside, torn rugs were strewn over the cold, broken floorboards.

Thor and Robert crept up the stairs towards his parents bedroom. Bluebird bashed into their parents bedroom door, knocking it off it’s hinges. They stomped into the room. Immediately, Thor spotted the code wheels his mother showed him. In a blink of an eye, they ran to them. Thor said “look away Robert” and he did. Thor put the code in; 1309. A secret door opened. Inside, steel walls welded together by rivets. Slowly, They went in- at the back was the family locket. Thor charged towards it and got it into his hands for the first time.

Robert got it from Thor and opened the door. Inside was the last thing they thought to find. It was a drawing of a new mechanimal powered by the sun. The new mechanimal was a Dragon. “A new mechanimal that is powered by the sun. It will put businesses out of business. That’s impossible to make!” Thor Yelled
“No wonder your dad has so many enemies” whispered Robert. Thor took it again. He saw strange markings. His mother had told him that this was the family’s secret writing, and if you could read it you could live forever. Amazed, he tried to read it, and he could: Don’t have me out of this house or I will loose my powers. ” What powers?” Thought Thor…

“You found it” came a icy voice from the bed. Spinning round Bluebird, Robert and Thor gasped . instantly, They recognized him fathers old friend, Professor Doodlebug. He combed his white hair with hand and smiled… but this was not a nice smile. The professor lacked warmth. “Your father hid this from me. I needed this to build it then your father stopped trusting me. I lived hear because I knew that you will come to get the locket. Now give it to me!” In four strides he took the locket from me and leant on my head. Slowly, Professor doodlebug took the key from Bluebird. Thor took it back and put it in the key hole. Amazed, Doodlebug stopped leaning on my head and marched a couple of steps away.

A few seconds later, Their were lifted out of the house and into the old coal shed at the side of the house. There was only a small window on the roof, to high to get to. The door was firmly locked. Slowly, getting up Thor went to the door and tried to open it. “Locked he double crossed my father as well” cursed Thor. Robert sat on a coal sack wiping oil, from professor doodlebug’s gloves, and coal dust of his fingers. “We’ll never get out of here” grumbled Robert
“O yes we will if I get a little bit of glass I could set the door on fire and get out of this annoying shed.” Determined not be out run by a scallywag.

Chapter 2 locked Buster SWW

Chapter 2

Slowly, Barney and Old Rusty crept towards their home. It looked like it had been left for a lifetime, Old Rusty looked at Barney and nodded. Nervously, Barney slipped out the key that he had got from the letter, and put his other hand to support it since it was the size of a cup. The dented gold key could be used again. There was a bang! Suddenly, they dropped the key and it was swallowed by the deep mist. Barney gasped, as quick as a flash he shot down accidentally headbutting Old Rusty’s head. There was a bang, crack. It wasn’t just the key: it was the branch above them. Worried, Old Rusty caught sight of something shiny from the corner of his eye, it was the key. Barney jumped away thinking his horse would come with him but he didn’t. Quickly, Old Rusty grabbed they key in his mouth and ran. The huge branch had fallen with a bang and Barney worried that a crunch like tin had crushed Old Rusty! The golden key hit Barney’s feet. He started crying. There was a voice next to him,
“Too bad for that old bin.” Barney looked round, it was Old Rusty!
“Sorry pal I dropped the key when I fell over.”
Excitedly, Barney rushed to the door with the key. He put the key stiffly in the keyhole. There was a click that echoed through the hall. Home.

Old Rusty sighed, “I missed home.” He shot up, “Right, where is this ring then?” They started to run over the damp wooden floor, dodging the lifeless robots. After a while, they got to the abandoned living room. It was how they had left it. The blood red wallpaper was still up. The fluffy scarlet carpet was still clean. Barney looked around at the walls and saw the pictures of his family and him, when he was a baby. A tear dropped out of his eye as he remembered all the memories. Old Rusty nudged him. Then he woke up into reality. Walking towards the fireplace they saw the red velvet chair, where her father always sat but now he was gone. There were two boxes and a little golden clock. He opened the first box. There was some money inside of the box. Barney put down the box on to the see-through back glass. Sighing he picked up the other box. There was a red light waiting for an eye. Cautiously, he put he eye to it. It turned green and opened. There it was. The Ring.

The key to the most valuable sky ship ever. “What is that inside?” asked Barney.
“A map to treasure.” replied Old Rusty Barny starting to run to the front door with Old Rusty chasing Barney. At last they made it to the tin on the floor in the garden excited he pulled it over. At last the sky ship had reached light. Barney jumped into the sky ship. Barney was running around the sky ship yelling, “When will Papa mum and me fly this when!” Until he remember they were gone. Forever.

There were loud footsteps on the sky ship. They both quietly span around there was a shadow coming down the deck. At that moment, Barney knew that he gave away where they were. Suddenly someone else came round the sail saying,
“Give us the ring and no one has to get hurt.” Barney ran past him, with Old Rusty galloping into the person. They ran back in the house, slammed the door and ran upstairs and hid in Barney’s mums bedroom. Old Rusty whispered,
“Hide unless you want to get caught” Barney jumped in the closet giving Old Rusty two pieces of wood. Suddenly the person came into the room. But didn’t see them and because Old Rusty was posing as a rocking horse. They sighed in relive. Seconds later Barney got out panicking. Felling in his pockets Barney whispered,
“I lost the key.” They ran to the window and saw the people walking away laughing with the book.
Barney knew it was his fault.

Old Rusty stared in fury and got Barney on his back and galloped outside. They turned around. All of a sudden, Old Rusty collapsed sending Barney flying into the people’s feet they stamped on his head his vison went black. After a couple of hours. Barney woke up and his vison was burly. He saw Old Rusty next to him. Barney wiped his head and winded up Old Rusty. After two minutes he woke up saying,
“Why are we in a bunker?” Barney said
“We not just in a bunker we are also doomed.”

Chapter two-Cogheart Adventures.


Chapter 2

The Golden Brook twisted and turned. Feeling worried, she slowed down. She would be all right. Quietly, Evelyn looked deep into the clear brook, that shimmered in the sunlight. It gushed to the west, in the direction that her Pa had died. She sighed, contently, knowing that this was the place her Pa had loved, and the place he visited most. She strained her ears to hear the familiar voice of her Ma blessing him, but there was none. Within the depths of the brook, the water was a clear gold, that turned a phoenix red in the sunset and sun rise. It was as beautiful as the sun. The fish seemed peaceful, gliding forwards, then jumping up, almost flying, then going back down again. Breathing out a small sigh of tranquillity, she stepped, daringly close to the river.
”C’mon. We’d better go now, or we’ll never get out again.”

Evelyn and Robert walked slowly up the brook, on and on, until their feet were covered with blisters. Arconcia fluttered cheerily behind.
”The sun’ll be going down soon.” Robert said helpfully.
Evelyne snapped back, ”We are NOT going back until we find the harp.”
Glancing at the brook, she noticed something strange. The fish’s patterns had changed. They seemed to be going around a large lump of wood, that was decaying, but Evelyn’s sharp eyes spotted a glint of gold. The harp. Yelling at the top of her lungs she said: ”Here! HERE!” Scrambling over a few rocks, and falling on the springy grass more than twice, she reached the brook. She staggered into the water, which was oddly warm near the wood. Without caring about keeping clean nails, she dug at the wood, throwing it carelessly out of the brook. It revealed a small, gleaming harp.

Evelyn passed it to Robert. Interested, he examined it closely, observing every single detail.
”Ahah!” exclaimed Robert. He took out two, transparent screws, delicately.
”Careful,” gasped Evelyne, ”It’s delicate!” The harp split in half, making no noise on the light green grass. Evelyne fought the urge to run and strangle Robert; she knew he knew what to do, and wouldn’t break it deliberately. Encased inside was a single, glowing string, as long as the harp, but as delicate as a butterflies wings. A note lay beside it bearing only the words: Your heart will beat forever.
”No wonder your mother had enemies. This means that this string, this innocent string, can keep you alive for ever!”

”Indeed. Why don’t you pass it to me? It may be – dangerous.” Hissed a smooth voice from behind them. Evelyne and Robert whipped around, and gasped. A silhouetted figure leaned carelessly on a nearby tree, and Evelyne could see a smug look among his ugly features. Recognising something distinctive about the way he moved, something in her brain clicked. Lord Goldfly. Her own, dear, great uncle was being the villain. Lord Goldfly passed his hand through his pale blonde hair, and smiled, unkindly. Arconia fluttered excitedly, spectating the view in front of her.
”I’ve been…. waiting for you. To lead me to the treasure of my life. Thank you.” He finished harshly. He snatched the string from Evelyne’s hands, as rapidly as a gust of strong wind. He cackled, his head turned to the sky, all his teeth showing. Darting around, Evelyn looked for an exit. It was too late.

Only minutes later, the children had been encaged in a dull, gloomy room, with a thin **** as a window. It was like a real prison, but worse. The door was bolted and locked, as strong as an ox, and there was no stones that revealed a passage.
”He-he betrayed my PA!” Evelyne stamped her feet hard on the cold floor.
”Did you know that stone is made from granite, marble, travertine, limestone, and slate?” Said Robert, saying the dreaded did you knows.
”No.” Snapped back Evelyne. ”We are going to get out of hear, rescue Ma, and get that string back.”
”Good luck with that.” Murmured Robert. Evelyn gave him a look that made him shrivel, immediately making him regret even speaking.
”We are going to find our way out!” Retorted Evelyn. As Robert brushed the dust off his his fingers, he could only fell one emotion: Despair.

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Happily, Poppy, Noah and Buddy arrived at Poppy’s previous home. Surprisingly, it was summer there and it was as hot as an oven which put them in a happy mood. There were trees standing outside, showered in flowers. The healthiest green grass was sitting down enjoying the peace. “It looks the same” said Poppy smiling.
Excited, Noah grabbed the key that was the size of a hammer.
“Wow” said Poppy nervously.
Poppy was scared the key was going to be too big for the door! Poppy liked that her new house had not turned into this rusty old home, she liked it being joyful and happy. They were all surprised that the memory book was going to be in there. Even Buddy was. “Right time to go in” said Noah excitedly. The door opened.

Amazingly, a room full of blue clouds filled their eyes. “My old room” shouted Poppy. There was her neatly made bed, her fake play dog sat on her doll house, and her favourite book shelf over in the corner of the room. It was her old special book with her diamond of memories in it. “It was safe” said Poppy relieved. “There it is” said Noah.

Excitedly, Poppy opened the precious memory book to a page with her 9th birthday memories. She felt tingles shooting up her spine and suddenly she could see and hear her family singing happily just like in the photograph on the page of the book. She realized what this book could do. The photos came alive she would be able to watch her mum’s and dad’s wedding day or when she was just a baby. “Wow” she whispered.

“Bark bark” interrupted Buddy. Surprised by the dog, Poppy knew that something must be wrong. Slowly, Poppy picked the book up and turned to a random page. Suddenly, they heard loud foot steps stomping up the stairs. They all peered out of the door curiously. “Give me the memory book now” came a deep voice. They froze in shock. He grabbed her harshly. Poppy knew that she had no choice but give the book away. He grabbed the book.

A few hours later, Poppy, Noah and Buddy found there self sat on a heavy piece of hay, in a deep black pit under ground. ” We will never get out of here” moaned Noah. Poppy did not like how Noah was so negative about everything. But Poppy knew that there must have been some way to get out. Even though Poppy was really positive about this she was still struggling to find a way out. Buddy was slouching on the floor tired from the two hour long journey. It was pitch black and the only light was a tiny little bit of the sun glancing through. They were all scared and trapped in this pit with scattered mud.

chapter 2 things got worse…

Chapter 2 


Cranky ran to the manor and it was snowing on every surface. The fog was thicker than a double decker bus, it touched cranky like his what used to be a nice owner.He opened the door, it was inviting him into the shadow realm almost. Cranky was scared but also determined to get the ring,  he was petrified but he went in anyways he went into  the library and gazed upon the sea of books and something caught his eye. It said in big, bold font letters, magic rings and how to use them(prototype)he grabbed it and then heard “not so fast “he said taking the book and out fell the ring…

The watch that goes in back in time and forward

Chapter 2


Buckingham palace stood silent as Mavis and Wendy crept into the gloomy shadow of the massive house. Quickly, the girl and the mechanimal leaped over the gates and pounded into the house. Then, very sneakily, they wandered up the stairs into a dark bedroom which was full of dirty clothes all over the floor. The wallpaper was ripping off. It sounded like a cat was in the room and it was scratching the wallpaper off. They couldn’t find the watch(that could go forward and backwards in time). So, they bounded into another room where they saw Mavis’s dad’s greatest ever rival. He was called PROFESSOR PONELOPE. Suddenly, Mavis caught a glimpse of the watch and risked the jump of getting caught or not. They both got caught and were put in the coal shed just outside the house. There was no escape. They were locked in…

The Secret Watch Chapter 2 by Ayla and Maya

End of chapter 1


“He’s right” squeaked Shadow. “We need to get back to Thorn house and save it before the bad people get it.”


Chapter 2


Thorn House stood silent. Ava peered up to her once-welcome bedroom. But the usual brightness from a flickering candle was gone. Outside, the brisk coldness of winter snow brushed across the cobbled pathway of doom. Outside,a gnarled tree dropped rough bark. Ava snatched the keys and the lock clicked but the warmth of the house was now cold like the sea in the winter. Inside, the thick dust hung in patches like seaweed scrabbling to cling onto a jagged rock.


Ava and Luke staggered up the not-so velvety stairs and went directly to her bedroom. Shadow,sniffled for ideas.The lilac marble wallpaper was peeling off in damp places. The frame of her bed was crooked and the splinters were zooming round the room like a rocket.Fragments of her favourite candles were still on her shelf neatly above the books she had collected. Thankfully, her chromebook, with stickers of her adventures plastered on the cover, was still hidden at the back of her rustic wardrobe. 


Curious, Luke picked up the chromebook and accidentally pulled back a secret slot. It revealed a note bearing that her Father had invented a new bun with glazed icing.


“No wonder people are chasing him. If you can create a food then that would be GREAT. Worth a fortune.” muttered Luke, full of amazement. 


“ So that’s why he’s disappeared! “Exclaimed Ava.

“ Exactly,” came a frosty voice. Out of the darkness,professor fire swished into the room. His hair was burning orange and his teeth caramelised with rot. “I have been waiting for you to appear. I need that recipe plan,” he snarled and with that he snatched it off her, cackling to himself.


Minutes later,the children were locked in a garage with tools,bikes and lots more surrounding them!

“We’ll never get out of here,” he muttered with pain.

“Yes we will. We’ll fight back,” she demanded…

The necklace-Chapter 2


“You probably should, we gotta go to FencePort Castle now,” roared Olivia “ROAR!”


Chapter 2

The second they arrived at FencePort Castle Donna’s heart sank. It wasn’t what she imagined to look like. There were no lights in any rooms. Darkness all around. She looked up to her dad’s room and there was no smoke coming out of the chimney. Lily groaned as little drops of rain splattered onto her hood. She reached down and grabbed the keys from her little purple handbag. CREAK. The door opened. Every step they took there was an awful creaking sound. No pictures of their family hung up anymore, instead there were pictures of a professor.


Donna sprinted to her bedroom with Olive close behind and Olivia sniffing round the place sniffing like mad. Donna fell to the ground to find that her room was a mess. Floorboards were missing, the door knob to her cupboard was broken, there were feathers all over the floor from her featherdown pillow and most importantly she managed to open her cupboard and found her diary.


Olive picked up the diary and the best news in the world made a smile appear on her round face. It was the necklace. Her mother’s necklace. It had the butterfly printed onto the collar like Donna had been telling Olive about earlier that day. “Wow this is amazing. This necklace is really rare, no wonder people are after it.”


“Oh! I get it now” cried Donna, staring at the beautiful necklace engraved onto the necklace.


“I agree,” came a deep voice echoing through Donna’s bedroom. Donna gasped. She knew who this man was. This man was Professor Thunder, her dad’s old friend. He itched his ear and grinned maliciously……….. “I’ve waited ages for you to come back and collect your necklace. Look over here, it’s your father!” he cried, Donna turned her head to her balcony hoping to see her father. He wasn’t there. Before she could say something mean back to him he snatched the necklace out of Olive’s arms.


Later, the two girls and the lion awoke to find themselves locked away in the wood shed. There was a tiny little hole on the wall, just about the size for a rat to wriggle through. “What an evil man. My dad trusted him.” Donna sobbed. She banged on the door. “Help! Help! He is a clever man isn’t he. He’s locked it and probably tied it with rope.”


“Say hello to our new home,” whimpered Olive, not really wanting Donna to hear. 




“Alright then, no need to shout,” whispered Olive so quietly, nobody could hear her. She looked at the floor, not sure what else to do or say…


A funny adventure by Monty and Milo

End of chapter 1


He had been killed in the aircraft crash at a small village in Manchester. Suddenly, she heard a rustle from the tree nearest her. Seconds later, a familiar face poked out. “What are you doing here?” asked Miranda!


Chapter 2


The mechanical fox lept out of the tree and trotted towards her. The mech fox replied,

“I have come to share you news that knowone knows. It is secret!”

“What” asked Lily with a look of suspicion on her face.”

The mech fox breathed and then said “Come with me. It’s not safe here. Someone could overhear us.! The mechanical led Miranda away through the back lanes towards where her father used to live.


Chapter 2 

As they peered through the door of the seaways they went up stairs and saw her sea crystal on her bed side table.She held it up against the sunlight and checked it was the real one.

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One of the goldfists kicked down the door and put his hand on Nectarine shoulder and said give me that sea crystal.Or you’ll be in deep trouble in our coal mine.We’ll have you dig the gold when you get better at it.The goldfist called Ki striked the back of Nectarines leg with the back of his shotgun…