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Chapter 4

  Chapter 4    The End of Doom 

I’m now in Dead Land, the Gorm haven’t found me yet, but they have flown over me and I’m going to bed in the deep dark mucky forest to sleep. 

The following day I went to the mucky pond down at the dark town park and fed the ducks with the Gorms worst nightmare – Sheep. 

Later, that day I walked into an old friend, and he was pretending to be a Gorm.  So, then I jumped on top of him, and he said “Stop! I am pretending to be a Gorm so I can tell you all their secrets to help you kill them.” 

“Thank you for helping me kill the spiky irritating Gorm.” I said. 

“Let’s go to my place for diner.” said Spike. 

 I said “No way Hozie “I said.  

 Spike said “Why not? “ 

 

Emilia P4 

Oyne  

 

Disney wonders Emporium

 

Prologue 

Do you know what is inside the Disney Wonders Emporium? Well, the re are lots of magical rooms. There are princess rooms and one for every Disney movie ever made.  There is even one magical room with the Disney castle in it and it feels magical. But will Mr D get mad? 

 

Chapter 1 

Not long ago in France there was a nineteen-year-old girl called Belle. She liked Stitch, her favourite colour was yellow she had brown hair with blue eyes. Belle had loved Disney films ever since she was two.  

One day Belle went to Disneyland Paris and saw a job opening so of course she said yes, she would sign up for an interview. A few days later she had the interview, and she got the job. Belle was so overjoyed you would not believe how happy she was.  

At the interview, Belle met the owner of Disney.  His full name was Walter Elias Disney, but he said Belle could call him Mr D.  Mr D told Belle to come back the next day and that her first job was to be a director for the parade, so people didn’t get in the way of the floats. 

 

Chapter 2  

Mr D called Belle into his office and showed her an old book and told Belle do not right in the book the next day Belle found the book of wonders out and thought about the book and she thought one little thing won’t hurt the emporium, so she imagines what she wants then she decided to go to Aberdeen in Scotland  

 Belle disobeyed Mr D. Mr D saw her righting in the book and stopped her. 

Belle got told off and something bad happened a storm approached and every one that worked at Disneyland got sent home and told not to come back until the storm stops. 

 

 

Chapter 3 

Belle was curios why the storm just started she thought it was odd so that night she went to bed dreaming what will happen to the rides should I go check if anything is broken? Belle chose to go check because nobody would be there, so she snuck out of her house and headed to the rides. Belle thought someone was there because she heard a clank coming from her right, but she ignored it and carried on and went left heading to crusher’s coaster and she had a doubt it would be fixed bud when she got their Belle was shocked because it was fixed after that Belle checked every ride in that area and found that they were all fixed. There was only one ride left to check,” The runaway Mine Train” but it looked like someone got there before Belle as she did not recognise the person, she could see it was a boy but that’s all she could tell from the distance. When she got closer, she heard a faint voice say help then a clank, so Bell ran as fast as she could and saw someone squashed under the track Bell helped the person up and out of under the track. After that Belle said to the boy what is your name the boy said Celeb what’s your name the boy said. she said Belle so they became friends the storm stopped, and everyone came back to the park Belle spotted a glance of Mr D, and he was hedding there way oh no said Belle he is going to catch us. 

 

Chapter 4  

Mr D spotted a glance of belle and Celeb and ran to them to see wat was going on. When Mr D came over to them, he said broke my rule again Belle, I see you met Belle interrupts Mr D and said I already know him his name is Caleb right Caleb Belle said glancing at him. Mr D looks annoyed Belle came into Mr D office and explained why she was there, and Caleb had to explain too, and both of them felt ashamed Mr D told Belle that Caleb is made of magic Belle reaped after him in a surprised way. Belle he is not allowed out of France only with permission from Mr D and Caleb is my son said Mr D Really said Belle Yes Belle Caleb said. Although Mr D was not very happy with Belle and Caleb but the thought of coming to fix the park was kind. A few months later Belle wanted to go home to see her family, so she did after saying goodbye to all the staff and on her last day she got to meet stitch and her last day was the best day ever. 

 

 

The Futuristic Museum

Prologue: 3rd May 3033 

The museum just appeared out of nowhere. there was lot of tech stuff, including a huge time machine that could fit 5 people and a bus inside! It could carry up to 1000kg and the titanium door was 2m long, half a metre wide and 4m tall.  

Three days later a message appeared on the door that said, “We are going to the past using the special button on our time machine.”  

And then the museum disappeared… 

 

Chapter 1: Present Day 

Jim was a nine-year-old boy who lived in Aberdeen. He had a mum, a dad and a 10-year-old brother called Bob who had gone missing, many years before, on his second day of school and never been found. 

 

It was one week before Jim’s birthday and his brother’s birthday had been the week before. It had been an incredibly miserable day for the family. 

Jim was walking down an alley his never walked down before. He was very scared because there were black cats and people who were gambling on gas cans. He reached the end of the alley and saw this building which was very tall and there was someone taking an iPhone off a huge titanium door. And the actual building was very futuristic it had no window a flat stone roof, grey bricks, and a white metal. Then he stepped inside the walls where the same, but the iron was blue not white. He saw a man he was very tall about 2 and a half meters he had a long grey beard he had green eyes and he looked familiar but then he saw a picture of his brother! And the man and bob were wearing his school clothes then he realised it was 8:32 and school starts at 9:00. So, he ran out of the mysterious futuristic museum. He could not stop thinking about the photo of his brother he asked bob’s old friends if they knew where he went, they said they had no idea. The next day since it was a Saturday, and he had no school, he went to the museum again. When he walked in the man was writing in a book, he wrote I want a room with a rocket ship that can teleport people to the moon and back. Then he said never ever write in this book without my permission I am guessing you are interested in the museum Jim; I can feel it. Jim said how do you now my name? And fled out as fast as he could.  

 

Chapter 2 

Jim still could not think about who that and was and why he looked familiar. And, why he had a picture of his brother he went back the next day after calming down from the man knowing and saying his name. When he stepped in and looked at the picture, he realised it was on the beach and in the water was Jim!! “Where is he what did you do to him!” Jim shouted at the man. The man just said “I am your father” he walked towards Jim and took off paint cans off his feet and a fake beard off his face. “You are my dad,” said Jim “but you job is being a firefighter” he quickly said. Go ask them Jim’s dad said Jim walked out to the fire station and asked them if a 2-meter-tall man with green eyes worked there they said “no”. Do you want to wite in my adventure diary he said Jim nodded what do I write. “anything” Jim’s dad said he always wanted a pet, so he wrote I want a pet shop with all the animals in the world. “that’s a nice addition to the shop” said Jim’s dad “does Mum know and where is Bob” said Jim well Bob is here he opened a lavender curtain and there was Bob. “And mom does not know” said Jim’s dad. I have made 1000 pounds “WHAT!!” Said Jim “what could we do with that money” Jim said quietly. He was very surprised because he had never seen anyone go in the shop except from himself. Jim said what is that machine he was pointing to the time machine to the right of Bob. That’s my time machine “that’s impossible,” said Jim with an unbelieving face. No, I invented it all by myself and help from Bob. Then suddenly BOOM!!             

 

The farm emporium

Jeremys first job was to cultivate the fields, just as he was about to go cultivate cheerful Charlie. Charlie warned Jeremy not to right in the farm book of wonders, however one day Jeremy thought he could get sheep on his farm, so

he decided to wright in the book to get sheep. The next day, he went to the door to see if it had worked, and he went in the door it had! He now had sheep.

the spooky Emporium

The Spooky Emporium 

Prologue 

There is a girl called Eloise she is an orphan she gets bullied by boys and girls from the orphan house and she has no friends she was getting chased by the boys on a rainy day and spotted an emporium a spooky emporium and when she found it. she went in closed the door it was unlocked, and she saw a dark blue curtain it was mind blowing. she saw heaps of things she wanted to touch. Spooky scary even scarier thing she did not know what she was seeing. 

Chapter one: The Book 

On a rainy day Eloise was running for her life because the boys were running to her trying to get her and kicker but she too faster than she switched she went inside the house but she didn’t know what it was and the bullies could not find her so they ran back to the Orphan home and she looked around but she saw so many things she wants to touch she saw a dark blue coating and then she saw a book she wanted to touch it she didn’t know what it was she was good to go through it and she saw so many things she wanted to touch and then she felt someone behind her she looked this shopkeeper she asked if she could buy something in the Emporium shopkeeper said why you don’t buy things here you look you can touch if you want what’s your favourite animal the shopkeeper said Eloise said a magpie he went through the dark blue curtain and then she went to play with the little things then children ways from the dark blue curtain she saw magpie’s 2 magpie’s come out of it made out of diamonds she tried to touch one then they smashed on the ground into rubies and diamonds then she ran outside trying not to tell the shopkeeper what happened then the shopkeeper came through and so the rubies and diamonds and he touched it they turned back in to the magpie’s and a grin went along his face. 

The next day she came to see the spooky emporium shop again it was so cool that she can forget about it she went in end the shopkeeper said how did you remember I was here how did you remember the emporium was here expect I just came here yesterday said Eloise shopkeeper was impressed about how she remembered because she wouldn’t never know if the shopkeeper head **** his magic. He was so impressed that she asked her if she wanted to join the emporium Eloise was super surprised so she said to the shopkeeper I’ll think about it the shopkeeper said I’m leaving in two days you better better come here in two days or else I’m not giving you a chance. The next day she came to the emporium and said to the shopkeeper I will join you but what will I do in the emporium she said you will l make it dustier make it look spookier do as whatever as I say  Eloise said okay Eloise asks what’s your name to the shopkeeper the shopkeeper answered Amy. Amy asked what’s your name. Eloise answered Eloise. Eloise thanked her for letting her join the emporium, but she was gone in a second. 

The next day Eloise sleeping in a bed in a caravan and someone staring at her it was a boy staring at her in bed and he said to her you have a nicer room than me now you are in the emporium you have to follow my mum’s rules. What do you do in the emporium said the boy. Eloise said I make it dirtier make it looks spookier and that’s all I do I don’t know what else she wants me to do. the boy stared at her for a minute he said his name was Jacob he asked what was her name. Eloise answered Eloise. Eloise was going to say why you asking me this but he was gone in a second. She got out of her bed got direst got ready to do her jobs she did all her jobs she saw the book Amy was there and she said to her you can write in it everyday with me watching you and if you don’t there will be big trouble. 

 

Chapter 2 the room 

The next day Eloise made the Emporium dirty and spooky she saw Jacob again she asked if they wanted to hang out together. Jacob asks what was her favourite colour was and she said purple she asked the same question, and he says red she was going to ask hem another question, but he was gone in second. She saw the book of secrets she was so despret so she stated writing in the book she saw the door she went in she saw Lites and x-mas ever Wayer she looked to the left and a frowns. 

part 2

Or else what you don’t want to know what will happen “ok” I said. I followed him, and he led me to I sat beside it fire. Harold gave me a hot chocolate and

then he said he had to go and do something, I was alone with the book I can’t help it I opened the book, and I wrote in it, I wrote about a new emporium a water emporium it has waterfalls and rain just then the door slammed” WHAT ARE YOU DOING! said Harold I said nothing why did you write in the book? ok sorry I said. I got curious” you better run said Harold” you don’t have Much time…””

the fashion Emporium

The Fashion Emporium  

Prologue 

There are some places where everyone loves to go. The Fashion Emporium is not like that. Even though at charismas, the lights on dresses are so attractive, no one cares. Even though at Easter lots of eggs hide behind the dresses and suites, nobody notices. Even though it looks like you are wearing the dresses or suits when you gaze through the window, nobody is interested.  It is like no one even knows it is there except Clare and she loves it. 

 

Chapter 1  

As the wind blew in Clares hair, she ran in to the fashion Emporium she stopped, she saw a big leather book on a desk while she was looking, she picked it up and it opened to all the dresses in the world. She went as close as she could just to see the book as itself. All Clare could see was the neatest handwriting she had ever seen. Behind her was a voice “I see you like my fashion book.” With that the book shut itself and went back on the desk. “How did the book do that!” Clare stumbled to say. “The book is magical Clare.” The women said gently. “Always wright in it only with me.” 

 

Chapter 2 

As Clare was trying to get to sleep that night thinking about the thought of righting the in the book. So, she got out of bed and got the book and she started to draw all she could see on the page was a beautiful school called Oyne school in the school was a class and in the class was something magical. She put the book back on the desk and ran to see the new door she could see the door. It was right next to her! As she entered the room, she could not breath it was like she imaged in her head it was a dream come true the school was there the class was there she went in the school she went into the class and in the class was a dress she went out of the class and went out of the school as she got out of the school her face went in shock. 

Disney wonders emporium

Prologue 

Do you know what is inside the Disney Wonders Emporium? Well, the re are lots of magical rooms. There are princess rooms and one for every Disney movie ever made.  There is even one magical room with the Disney castle in it and it feels magical. But will Mr D get mad? 

 

Chapter 1 

Not long ago in France there was a nineteen-year-old girl called Belle. She liked Stitch, her favourite colour was yellow she had brown hair with blue eyes. Belle had loved Disney films ever since she was two.  

One day Belle went to Disneyland Paris and saw a job opening so of course she said yes, she would sign up for an interview. A few days later she had the interview, and she got the job. Belle was so overjoyed you would not believe how happy she was.  

At the interview, Belle met the owner of Disney.  His full name was Walter Elias Disney, but he said Belle could call him Mr D.  Mr D told me to come back the next day and that her first job was to be a director for the parade, so people didn’t get in the way of the floats. 

 

Chapter 2  

Mr D called Belle into his office and showed her an old book and told Belle do not right in the book the next day Belle found the book of wonders out and thought about the book and she thought one little thing won’t hurt the emporium, so she imagines what she wants then she decided to go to Aberdeen in Scotland  

 Belle disobeyed Mr D. Mr D saw her righting in the book and stopped her. 

Belle got told off and something bad happened a storm approached and every one that worked at Disneyland got sent home and told not to come back until the storm stops. 

 

 

cat emporiom

One morning I woke up suddenly and I drank some water from the bedside table. I opened my closet and saw a black ball. When I touched

it, everything went black.

When I woke up and dragged myself to my feet, then realised I was in a cat shop! I looked around and I saw a man with a sack over his head, wearing a dark purple suit with a red bow and a purple top hat. He had fiery orange eyes. And his name was Harold

He showed me a book with white fur on it but he warned me never to write in it or else…

The Football Emporium

Prologue

There are some places that everybody goes, like the park, the shops, cafes and many more but nobody dares to go to the stadium of Wonder. Let’s go back to the 1st of October, when the ground that the stadium lies in was completely empty, nothing but grass. Unexpectedly, the Stadium of Wonders arrived on the 31st of October, better known as Halloween. Was it a coincidence or was it the spirits of Halloween? Nobody knows.

 

Chapter 1

Now it is the 2nd of November, and the Stadium of Wonders remains empty. Well, that’s what everybody in London thinks. On that same day Erin decided that she was going to play football with her mates. She took her normal route that goes past the empty fields when she realised that there was a football stadium there, so you can imagine she was very curious, so she was straight up to the main opening and then soon realised that the door was open, so she stepped in and straight away she saw tons and tons of football strips and she started to pick up some. She had about 6 football strips in her hand and noticed that they were cheap and was about £5 per strip and thought that was a little bit unusual so she was heading to try and find the till, but it was

nowhere to be seen. Then she heard an angry voice behind her “how did you get in hear I thought I locked the door and anyways we don’t open till noon so drop your stuff and get out of here” Erin was stunned and completely froze then the man spoke again “I said get out why are you still standing there” immediately she dropped her stuff and ran straight to the door pulling it back as hard as she could and without looking back she started running for her life. Until she got the sense that someone was following her, but she just kept on running and running.

 

The next day she decided to go back to the shop at noon, so she did, and she saw the same man again and he look really stunned to see her, so he came up to her and said, “how do you remember this place?” she replied with “well I was just hear yesterday and it was quite the experience so I don’t think I will be forgetting this very soon” then he said “follow me please I have something to show you” he led her downstairs Erin had no idea what was going on but she was interested what it could be, so she kept on following him and hie led her to the back of the room where there was a desk. He then opened the draw and took out this book that said “The managers secret handbook” he then said “Erin you have something special about you most people come and forget about The Football Emporium, but you somehow remembered” “this is the

managers secret handbook you right your wonders and wishes in it and it comes true now this can be a dangerous thing if you don’t do it right so that why you should never right in it without me I repeat You Should Never Right In It Without me have I made myself clear!?” Erin nodded in shock.

 

Chapter 2

After that he said, “Right you clearly have something special about you so how would you feel if I asked you to come and work for me?”. Erin took a moment to process what the man had just said She replied with “Yes, I would love to work for you, but I am only 11 and I have school, what if my parents start asking about the job? What do I say?” she then said, “Sorry, I forgot to ask what your name is?” that man started to walk around the room randomly picking up things and inspecting them then after a short while he said “my name is Hecter, but it is Mr. Corbett to you, ok?” Erin nodded her head “Anyway back to my question,” said Erin “Oh yeah” said Mr. Corbett “what I was going to say was when you come to The Football Emporium you could spend hours and hours in here and it would seem like ages but the second you step into the Emporium time stops so you mum and dad will never know that you have gone in the first place” “Wow” replied Erin “That is so cool” “Ok I need to go do some stuff so you can just have a little wander around and get to

know the place a bit more is that alright with you” Erin nodded her head “alright I will see you later on then” Mr. Corbett said “yep see you later” Erin replied. So Hecter went off to do his own thing and as soon as he left Erin went straight over to the desk and opened the book to the first empty page and wrote “I want to visit every stadium there is in the world by the end of the week.” then she waited and looked round and there was a door behind her, and it read “Step in to visit all the stadiums you can ever think of” so before without thinking twice she was in it then she thought maybe I shouldn’t have done that I don’t think that Mr. Corbett would be very happy with me if he found out what I have just done so she quickly turned around to open the door, but it was locked……