14th March Demo Grammar Session Blog Challenge

Welcome to the blog post challenge.

Below is an example of a blog post written by Pie.

Your challenge is to use careful word choice to rewrite the following passage, creating a different mood:

On an ornate table, someone had set out a luscious feast with thick slices of juicy chicken, huge bowls of green salad, glass jars of fresh fruit and silver plates of sweet puddings. Hundreds of tiny people were serving steaming pies, scarlet strawberries like gleaming embers and tall glasses of creamy drinks. They were dressed in curious clothes with scarlet cloaks, yellow shoes and crimson caps. Poppy tried to talk to the tiny people but they did not say a single word! 

©Pie Corbett 2021

Use the form below to write your poem and then submit it so it can be ready and commented on by a much wider audience.

Writing Tips

  • Always check your work before submitting;
  • Type your work into a separate document and save it before using copy and paste to submit;
  • Don’t use coloured text, it’s hard to read;
  • Don’t use emojis and text speech;
  • Don’t use the spacebar to move to the next line-use the return key;
  • Always stick to the task, we won’t publish stories and poems not related to the instructions.

Create your blog post - Grammar - Season 11

  • Eg. Sam - The Reflection by Jamie
  • Remember to double check your writing before you submit.