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Original – Then he saw it: a copper body glinted; a pair of beady eyes stared towards him; and metal claws grazed the bonnet’s rusted skin.

New version – Then she saw it: a green body smothered in slime heaved towards her; scarlet eyes bulged out of a grotesque head; and razor sharp talons clawed the ground.

Original – In this world, I discovered: gulleys where goblins skulk; valleys where trolls roam; sly corners where secrets hide; mantraps ready to trip you up and snare your legs in metal teeth; and sharp corners ready to snap your bones.

New version – In this world, I saw: tiny fish like splinters of light swimming in cool rock pools; black sand drifting into ominous dunes; herons waiting at the sea’s edge, watching; and tongue-tied swimmers standing silently by a life-guard’s post.