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when the snow falls

Jeffery didn’t want to leave home. He looked out the window.He missed his house, his room, everything.He got to his new parent’s house he went up to see his room it smelled weird.The room that I slept in was Mrs Hill son’s who’s in the war and if someone said anything about her son she would just ignore them and walk away.             

The first day of school went slow.The teacher was nice, he was called Mr Bob after school he realised Jeffery needed to practise writing so the next day Mr Bob helped Jeffery with his writing.The week flew by. Joseph began to get used to his new home. Most of the days he would spend it at school.Mrs hill keeps fruits and vegetables in her garden. Sometimes when Jeffery’s hungry I get them and eat them.     

Last night,Jeffery looked outside his bedroom window. He saw a lantern bright up and realised it was Mrs Hill. She went into the forest.Jeffery couldn’t wait to see what was down there.One night Mrs Hill asked Jeffery to follow her into the forest.The sun shined Mrs Hill went into the forest he quickly ran up thinking he would get lost.

 

She then stops by this big container.He  went a bit closer to see if something was inside of it. It smelled awful. It smelt like rotten fish.Mrs Hill then started to open “You might want to step back.”Inside the container had a creature with black eyes. It started growling. ”Meet Aqua, my pet Wolf. I found him lost in the mountains.” Jeffery gasped in disbelief.

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Aqua stared at Jeffery.His black, deadly eyes stared into his soul. He stood paralyzed with fear.His fur was as black as coal like the night skyAqua stared at Jeffery.His black, deadly eyes stared into his soul. He stood paralyzed with fear.His fur was as black as coal like the night sky.It’s claws were as sharp as the tip of a rocket ship.His fur was as soft as a fluffy blanket.To Jeffrey’s surprise his mouth opened. His teeth were as sharp as the tip of a sword and as hard as metal.Jeffery went forward and Aqua sniffed his hand.His tongue was as rough as a pile of rocks.Jeffery was shocked.

“He likes you,”whispered Mrs Hill.The Wolf then disappeared back into the container.On their way back the moon shone down on the path.“He’ll be watching wherever you go.”said Mrs Hill mysteriously. “I found him lost in the mountains inside a cave his parents must have abandoned him so I took him and fed him he’s not been here for that long and yet he’s grown so big.”Jeffery looked at Mrs Hill fascinated.”Remember Jeffery this is our secret don’t tell anyone or they’ll take him.”Jeffery then nodded.

That night Joseph imagined Aqua walking through the forest hunting for food.When he licked his hand it felt like he was trying to tell her something.Jeffery then got up and set Rabbit traps for Aqua to eat.He would eat Hares, frogs or rabbits.WHen he woke he would see what he’d trapped and feed it to Aqua.The first time Aqua wouldn’t Aqua stared at Jeffery.His black, deadly eyes stared into his soul. He stood paralyzed with fear.His fur was as black as coal like the night sky.It’s claws were as sharp as the tip of a rocket ship.His fur was as soft as a fluffy blanket.To Jeffrey’s surprise his mouth opened. His teeth were as sharp as the tip of a sword and as hard as metal.Jeffery went forward and Aqua sniffed his hand.His tongue was as rough as a pile of rocks.Jeffery was shocked.

“He likes you,”whispered Mrs Hill.The Wolf then disappeared back into the container.On their way back the moon shone down on the path.“He’ll be watching wherever you go.”said Mrs Hill mysteriously. “I found him lost in the mountains inside a cave his parents must have abandoned him so I took him and fed him he’s not been here for that long and yet he’s grown so big.”Jeffery looked at Mrs Hill fascinated.”Remember Jeffery this is our secret don’t tell anyone or they’ll take him.”Jeffery then nodded.

That night Joseph imagined Aqua walking through the forest hunting for food.When he licked his hand it felt like he was trying to tell her something.Jeffery then got up and set Rabbit traps for Aqua to eat.He would eat Hares, frogs or rabbits.WHen he woke he would see what he’d trapped and feed it to Aqua.The first time Aqua wouldn’t let Jeffery feed him but then he got used to it.

One day Jeffery went over to Aqua and let him pet his back whenever he came. Aqua would dig into Jeffery’s pocket looking for meat .Jeffery then got used to his new home he did everything he had to do Mrs Hill sometimes could hear him singing on the way to feed Aqua.Over the weeks Mrs Hill watched how Aqua and Jeffery bonded Mrs Hill realized how their secret bonded them. Aqua stared at Jeffery.His black, deadly eyes stared into his soul. He stood paralyzed with fear.His fur was as black as coal like the night sky.It’s claws were as sharp as the tip of a rocket ship.His fur was as soft as a fluffy blanket.To Jeffrey’s surprise his mouth opened. His teeth were as sharp as the tip of a sword and as hard as metal.Jeffery went forward and Aqua sniffed his hand.His tongue was as rough as a pile of rocks.Jeffery was shocked.

“He likes you,”whispered Mrs Hill.The Wolf then disappeared back into the container.On their way back the moon shone down on the path.“He’ll be watching wherever you go.”said Mrs Hill mysteriously. “I found him lost in the mountains inside a cave his parents must have abandoned him so I took him and fed him he’s not been here for that long and yet he’s grown so big.”Jeffery looked at Mrs Hill fascinated.”Remember Jeffery this is our secret don’t tell anyone or they’ll take him.”Jeffery then nodded.

That night Joseph imagined Aqua walking through the forest hunting for food.When he licked his hand it felt like he was trying to tell her something.Jeffery then got up and set Rabbit traps for Aqua to eat.He would eat Hares, frogs or rabbits.WHen he woke he would see what he’d trapped and feed it to Aqua.The first time Aqua wouldn’t let Jeffery feed him but then he got used to it.

One day Jeffery went over to Aqua and let him pet his back whenever he came. Aqua would dig into Jeffery’s pocket looking for meat .Jeffery then got used to his new home he did everything he had to do Mrs Hill sometimes could hear him singing on the way to feed Aqua.Over the weeks Mrs Hill watched how Aqua and Jeffery bonded Mrs Hill realized how their secret bonded them. Jeffery feed him but then he got used to it.

One day Jeffery went over to Aqua and let him pet his back whenever he came. Aqua would dig into Jeffery’s pocket looking for meat .Jeffery then got used to his new home he did everything he had to do Mrs Hill sometimes could hear him singing on the way to feed Aqua.Over the weeks Mrs Hill watched how Aqua and Jeffery bonded Mrs Hill realized how their secret bonded them. .It’s claws were as sharp as the tip of a rocket ship.His fur was as soft as a fluffy blanket.To Jeffrey’s surprise his mouth opened. His teeth were as sharp as the tip of a sword and as hard as metal.Jeffery went forward and Aqua sniffed his hand.His tongue was as rough as a pile of rocks.Jeffery was shocked.

“He likes you,”whispered Mrs Hill.The Wolf then disappeared back into the container.On their way back the moon shone down on the path.“He’ll be watching wherever you go.”said Mrs Hill mysteriously. “I found him lost in the mountains inside a cave his parents must have abandoned him so I took him and fed him he’s not been here for that long and yet he’s grown so big.”Jeffery looked at Mrs Hill fascinated.”Remember Jeffery this is our secret don’t tell anyone or they’ll take him.”Jeffery then nodded.

That night Joseph imagined Aqua walking through the forest hunting for food.When he licked his hand it felt like he was trying to tell her something.Jeffery then got up and set Rabbit traps for Aqua to eat.He would eat Hares, frogs or rabbits.WHen he woke he would see what he’d trapped and feed it to Aqua.The first time Aqua wouldn’t let Jeffery feed him but then he got used to it.

One day Jeffery went over to Aqua and let him pet his back whenever he came. Aqua would dig into Jeffery’s pocket looking for meat .Jeffery then got used to his new home he did everything he had to do Mrs Hill sometimes could hear him singing on the way to feed Aqua.Over the weeks Mrs Hill watched how Aqua and Jeffery bonded Mrs Hill realized how their secret bonded them.

CHapter 3

 The summer flew by.Every day Jeffery wandered around the field realizing how it looked like his old home.At his home the field was the same except the plants were dying.The blue bluebells were scattered around the field. The tree’s branches were swinging as the wind snapped it off, the scolding Sun shining bright.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

                                                                                                                                                                                             

At night Jeffery went into the woods where he played with Aqua.Sometimes they just sat                                    down gazing at the stars, or sat there doing nothing.Every time Aqua heard a noise he                               would go hide and stare out seeing who it was, realizing it was Jeffery with his food.The                                                  thing that Jeffery was scared of is someone came and saw Aqua.In the daytime Aqua                                       would go and hide then Jeffery would leave the food there.Then at night Aqua would                                               sleep in the biggest bushes he could find. At night Aqua wandered of into the forest                                                hiding in the bushes.                                                                                                                                                  

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

One day, Jeffery’s friend from school came to his house. He lived a few houses                                                            away.While they were playing games Jeffery’s friend Todd was where Aqua hides. Todd                                    then started screaming. Joseph rushed to see what happened.”Jeffery.”Said Todd                                           frightened. Todd saw Aqua “Don’t move, stay still.” He then calmed Aqua down by giving him food to give Todd enough time to run. Jeffery’s heart was thudding. What should I do next? thought Jeffery. The secret had been kept for so long now it’s gone, everyone will know about it.Jeffery and Mrs Hill thought all night about what to do.”We should take him to a new village, he’ll be safe there.”                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

 

When the snow falls

Jeffery didn’t want to leave home. He looked out the window.He missed his house, his room, everything.He got to his new parent’s house he went up to see his room it smelled weird.The room that I slept in was Mrs Hill son’s who’s in the war and if someone said anything about her son she would just ignore them and walk away.             

The first day of school went slow.The teacher was nice, he was called Mr Bob after school he realised Jeffery needed to practise writing so the next day Mr Bob helped Jeffery with his writing.The week flew by. Joseph began to get used to his new home. Most of the days he would spend it at school.Mrs hill keeps fruits and vegetables in her garden. Sometimes when Jeffery’s hungry I get them and eat them.     

Last night,Jeffery looked outside his bedroom window. He saw a lantern bright up and realised it was Mrs Hill. She went into the forest.Jeffery couldn’t wait to see what was down there.One night Mrs Hill asked Jeffery to follow her into the forest.The sun shined Mrs Hill went into the forest he quickly ran up thinking he would get lost.

 

She then stops by this big container.He  went a bit closer to see if something was inside of it. It smelled awful. It smelt like rotten fish.Mrs Hill then started to open “You might want to step back.”Inside the container had a creature with black eyes. It started growling. ”Meet Aqua, my pet Wolf. I found him lost in the mountains.” Jeffery gasped in disbelief.

Letter home

Dear Mum,

Thanks for the blanket it was the warmest blanket I have ever had.What felt like a decade we arrived in Wales.It looked way better than home smoke was choking the sky.I stood as still as a statue waiting for my future guardian.Then suddenly without any warning this lady grabbed my hand startling me.She then gave me a friendly smile bringing me to her home.

She lives in London in a small Cottage.We then went into her house Her name was Gertrude.I had a room in the attic.Every night I could hear bombings thinking if any would hit the house.

Anyways,she makes me clean up the house if I make any mess.I help her water the plants and she makes sure I put enough water in the plants.She made me clean out the pot and was wet,muddy and soggy. It was so wet I wish I could never do this again.

You won’t believe that Mrs Gertrude has a pet dog.I get to feed him and he’s so fluffy.Mrs Gertrude gives him apple seeds cause there’s not enough food in the house.

The village is not that small, it’s big.There’s not that many people in there.We rarely go outside for shopping cause of the bombs so when we go we make sure to get lots of stuff so we won’t keep on having to go back.

The school we go to is called Oakbridge Lynch.It’s just up street it only taes a bit of time to get there.The school is gooda there’s only 10 people there and it’s really small inside.All the kids that are there are nice none of them be mean.I sit at the back of the class.

I hope you are okay and we win the war and ****** gets defeated.

From
Umar

Letter home

Dear Mum,

Thanks for the blanket it was the warmest blanket I have ever had.What felt like a decade we arrived in Wales.It looked way better than home smoke was choking the sky.I stood as still as a statue waiting for my future guardian.Then suddenly without any warning this lady grabbed my hand startling me.She then gave me a friendly smile bringing me to her home.

She lives in London in a small Cottage.We then went into her house Her name was Gertrude.I had a room in the attic.Every night I could hear bombings thinking if any would hit the house.

Anyways,she makes me clean up the house if I make any mess.I help her water the plants and she makes sure I put enough water in the plants.She made me clean out the pot and was wet,muddy and soggy. It was so wet I wish I could never do this again.

You won’t believe that Mrs Gertrude has a pet dog.I get to feed him and he’s so fluffy.Mrs Gertrude gives him apple seeds cause there’s not enough food in the house.

The village is not that small, it’s big.There’s not that many people in there.We rarely go outside for shopping cause of the bombs so when we go we make sure to get lots of stuff so we won’t keep on having to go back.

The school we go to is called Oakbridge Lynch.It’s just up street it only taes a bit of time to get there.The school is gooda there’s only 10 people there and it’s really small inside.All the kids that are there are nice none of them be mean.I sit at the back of the class.

I hope you are okay and we win the war and ****** gets defeated.

From
Umar

Theburningsun

My anger is made from-

The burning sun

the scolding magma of a volcano

 The anger of everyone in the world.

 

I found it-

Trapped in a draw

Hiding in a pot

Not wanting to be seen.

 

This anger can-

pry open bars of steel

Break the biggest mountain in the world

Destroys anything in its path.

 

If I lost this anger-

Happiness would spread around the world 

Making people more joyful.

The burning sun

My anger is made from-

The burning sun

the scolding magma of a volcano

 The anger of everyone in the world.

 

I found it-

Trapped in a draw

Hiding in a pot

Not wanting to be seen.

 

This anger can-

pry open bars of steel

Break the biggest mountain in the world

Destroys anything in its path.

 

If I lost this anger-

Happiness would spread around the world 

Making people more joyful.

Paint explosion

The sun is,

as warm as a desert

like a flame sphere in the galaxy.

Fire ball.

 

A metal bottle is,

as shiny as tinsel

like a new present.

A diamond.

 

The ocean is,

as big as a city

like an unexplored cave.

Mysterious sea.

 

The snow is,

as cold as Antarctica

like sprinkles from the sky.

Frozen flakes.

 

The Galaxy is,

as colourful as a rainbow

like a confetti balloon.

Paint explosion.

 

 

 

Pirate ship

The creak of the deadly deck crashes with the ferocious waves.Then it crashes shattering the deadly deck.    lightning then hits the boat destroying it into pieces.DEstroying the ship,killing the people on it.The waves suffocating the ship as people shout for help.The blue waves flying around the ship sunking the ship into the unknown.