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The Monster in the Swamp

The sun peered through the curtains, birds were chirping and the wind was whistling. Flafe opened his eyes and got up, he still had his aching chest pain but it felt better than it was from yesterday. As he got up, he saw some food on a desk. There was a note. “Eat up!” Yawning, he started to eat.

 

     After eating, he equipped all his gear and exited his room. 

“Leaving so soon?” Asked the lady on the desk.

“Yes, I have to go somewhere,” Flafe replied

“That will be 12 Jabloons please.” reaching into his pockets, Flafe took out 12 Jabloons and gave them to the lady.

 

     Flafe opened the map and saw that if he had to get to the tree of life, he had to go through slimy swamp which was his next destination. It was close by so it wouldn’t take him too long to get there. As he ran he felt a sudden change in air, as if something bad was about to happen. It felt familiar.

 

     In the distance, he could see the swamp. An uneasy feeling crawled on his back. Flafe cautiously entered the swamp, there was an eerie silence. As flafe walked through the swamp he felt something touch his back, he turned round. No-one was there, he turned back. A tall, green figure loomed over Flafe.

 

“No, It can’t be you!”

Chapter 4 part 2

Before they could get up the police arrived. Two of the police officers came out of the police car and picked the 2 guards up. The police officers put the two guards inside the police car. After they had put the guards in the car they drove off and we all assumed they were taking the guards to prison.

Alice had a plan on how to stay safe for now. She told everyone to lock all the car doors for now while we’re inside the car. Alice told us when we get back into their house we’re going to lock all the doors, close all the windows and blinds so the Gorm or the Gorm’s assistants couldn’t see them or get inside the house.

Rachel and Erica look back out of the window and see the Gorm and its assistants running as fast as they could while chasing after us and catching up to us. Me and Erica told Emily and Alice and we all got terrified. Erica’s mum drove faster and kept turning hoping we could lose track of them so we could all go back to Erica’s house. 

After turning for a while Erica’s mum finally decided to get back home while asking if we had been dizzy by this point. Before we went to their house she stopped the car and asked Me to check if they were still chasing us. I looked back and replied with “No there’s no one there” so Erica’s mum started driving back to their house.

We all start to see Erica’s house and we all are glad that we’re back to safety and not endangered anymore. We all thank Erica’s mum for coming to save us. Emily asked Erica’s mum “How did you find out where we were being held?” “I had put a tracker in Erica’s pocket just so I knew where she was and that she was safe” is what Alice replied with. We get to the house and go inside and lock all the doors, close all the windows and close the blinds. Rachel said to her friends “Thank God we’re safe again I hope nothing like that happens to us ever again” “I hope the Gorm gets arrested and never gets out!” said Emily.

Chapter 4 part 1

The girls froze in terror; they didn’t want to be shot at all so they kept escaping a secret for now. Rachel and the girls were being held in an abandoned secret lair which has slime all over it, secret rooms, needles to start viruses and dead bodys which nobody knows about. They couldn’t leave just yet because there were guards everywhere. Some of the dogs were guards that are humans and are working for the Gorm but they weren’t nice. After a while of being trapped in the lair Erica had put her hands in her coat pockets and in one of the pockets she found a tracker she realized that her parents must have put it in there so she told her friends.

Erica tells her friends that her parents put a tracker in her pocket the whole time Rachel and Emily get so happy and excited to leave this gross place and go back home to be safe. They wait for a while to see if anyone is coming. Erica tells Rachel to check her phone to see if anyone is on their way to rescue them and also to turn on find my friend just in case the tracker did not work anymore. After she has done it they all wait and play a game of never have i ever. Then Erica looks at the tracker and shes a red light flashing and informs the others that the tracker is still working.

The gorm’s assistant came to check on them to make sure they hadn’t escaped while everyone was in the meeting room. The assistant checked on them and they were still there so he went back upstairs and to the gorm’s office. They all get bored and have nothing to do so they try to get out of the rope so they can escape. Then someone was coming inside the lair from outside. The girls were scared until they saw Erica’s mum. They all were so excited to leave so Erica’s mum went towards the girls and untied them they all went to the exit and left. At this point they were walking through the woods to leave and go back home. Then they see the exit and all the cars. They were about to leave through the exit but then two of the Gorm assistants had been guarding the exit. They say us trying to get to the exit. They came forward to attack and so did Erica’s mum so we just followed her and so we eventually met. Erica’s mum reached into her purse and got something out. We all asked “what’s inside the bag?” She said “ Something that will help us escape.” We all got confused and just watched. We saw Erica’s mum take some hair spray out of her purse and spray it into the guards faces so we could leave the woods. The guards fell to the ground.

We left the woods and walked to Erica’s mum’s car. We all got in the car and she started driving. We had Wifi then because we weren’t in the middle of woods anymore. Erica’s mum, Alice, could tell we were hungry so we went to a shop and we brought some snacks for us to eat.

Erica’s mum had said we were on our way to Erica’s house to relax and rest. We get closer and closer and I start to see Erica’s house. We all get  really excited. They could all see the house; it was bright red and it had fancy windows. They all were relieved and so happy they were home so they could feel safe while being at home.

 

chapter 3 part 1

They all take a look outside and they see this creature with bright red weird eyes, 4 legs, it has 5 antennas, it has sharp teeth, it has a lot of spiders inside its mouth and it also looks like an alien spider baby. Its skin was all ripped up or looked like it had been in a fire. Its back had spikes all over it just so no one could touch it or do anything with it.

They all go outside the tent with their flashlights and go check to see what’s there. They get brave enough and decide to go near this creature and see what it is. They decide to fight back and the creature comes closer to them and tries to attack them. They decided to be strong and fight back so they all tried to dodge the creature. Then Rachel finds a gun on the floor and shoots the creature. After she shot it they heard a noise behind them, they turned around and they saw nothing there. They turned back around and the creature was gone. They all got worried and scared so they rushed inside the tent and zipped it up.

After a bit they decide to go check if the creature is still there. There was no sign of it so they just went outside the tent and tried to find a way to get back home. They decide to get out of the buses and try to go where there was more light. They thought that if they went out of the dark and into the light they would be able to be seen by someone or be heard. They headed toward the light and they were so happy because they had heard cars and thought the people inside the cars could help them get back home.

 

 

chapter 3 part 2

They are almost out of the forest but they all get tired after fighting the Gorm. They decide to settle down in their tent and stay the night again. They get hungry so they look outside for fruit and in their backpack to see if they get any luck and find some food for them all to eat. They find some chocolate and berries in the trees and on the branches. The special item is an iPhone 12 and it has 3 cameras, it’s purple and it’s faster than any of the other phones. Rachel’s iPhone came from her pocket. She put it in her pocket before they left the house. Rachel is happy that she bought her phone with her because she needed it.

They all get tired after a long day of attacking, walking and finding food so they go to sleep. They get woken by footsteps and they look outside while shivering. They open the tent and see a teenager that was a bit older than them. They get relieved and say that they need help getting out. The teenager says that she can help them and that she will tell her Mum to give them a ride home. They all get excited but then they all get captured by the Gorm’s assistant. Rachel puts her iPhone in her pocket so no one knows that she has it with her. 

They get taken to this dirty secret lair in a secret door inside one of the trees. The Gorm is their and also its assistants. The secret lair is all dirty and it has chairs where they are all trapped and it also has gooey slime all under them. They were talking about escaping and the Gorm overheard them and threatened them that if they went they would be shot or killed and never be able to leave the lair.

chapter 2 part 2

They all decide that they all are safe and they are alright to sleep in the woods for the night. They all agreed to keep each other company for the night. They play a couple of  video games that are not dangerous or creepy to keep them company and so they don’t get scared in the middle of the night.

Once they had finished playing video games they all got very tired so they decided to go to sleep but before they did Rachel wanted to go explore in the middle of the night so they all said that they would go out in the woods at 2 am to explore and see if they could find anything creepy or haunted.

They all got hungry in the middle of the night and they did not have that much food left to eat. Rachel then decides to then go outside and look for some fresh fruit off the trees.Rachel comes back into the tent with apples and strawberries. They all eat the snacks and also the fruit. After they ate they all were tired but it was already 2 am so they went outside and explored. There was nothing creepy or scary outside; it was just trees and bushes so they all just went to sleep.

They all wake up from loud strange footsteps. They all get worried and Rachel decides to go check if she sees something scary. Rachel couldn’t see this person or creature but Rachel did see wide red eyes. Rachel ran back to the tent and closed it up. She told Emily and Rachel about this thing and they all got really scared so they all took torches and turned them on in the tent to see.

chapter 2 part 1

In the morning they wake up to a loud bag and smell something weird. They all start coughing and feel like they can smell smoke. They all get confused and go downstairs to check what the strange smell is. They all go downstairs and see the floorboards and walls all black as if it was burnt to crisp. They all got confused and went outside to check if something was happening outside that might have caused it. They all go outside and see that the house is completely on fire.Rachel thought someone must have burnt the house down when they were asleep. They all get scared and go back running into the woods. The girls get upset because they have nowhere to live anymore.

Emily had bought the tents just because of her suspicion she was sure they had to move out of that abandoned building for some reason. They look for a safe place to put the tent up. The safest place they could find was under a tree. They all set the tent up and put the sleeping bags down. They go inside the tent and all sit down. They all play never have i ever to pass the time and hope someone will come and rescue them.

The tent wasn’t that good; it had shrunk and was all burnt because of the fire and the smoke. They all finish playing, never have i ever and get bored they all try to ring their parents and other friends that were at home to try to get out of the woods because they weren’t that sure if they were absolutely safe where they were.

No one answers the phone except Erica’s mother. They all get relieved and they all say that they are stuck in the woods and not sure if they are safe and need help to get out of the woods so they know that they are safe but then the call cuts off. They all give their hopes up and just believe that they are probably going to be stuck in the woods forever and never going to be rescued but then they remember that they are under a tree and in front of them are long spiky bushes. They all think that they are safe for now.

 

 

Chapter 1 part 2

Erica goes inside and comes back out and says to Emily and Rachel “see there’s nothing in there it’s what every child could ever ask for!” They all go inside the portal. “Omg! this is a dream come true!” Emily screamed. Suddenly they all started seeing black in the colourful items. They all were confused and creeped out so they all left in terror and they were planning on going home but they ended up getting lost and distracted by this portal they forgot which way they came from. They find this old abandoned house which they had no choice than to just go inside and spend the night. 

When they go inside the house they see that the house is all dusty and dirty and has cobwebs everywhere. They all agreed it was abandoned because of the looks of it. The house had cobwebs and was all dusty. They weren’t so sure if staying in an abandoned building overnight would be a good idea but they had no other choice. They all go upstairs to try to find a bedroom. They found a bedroom and found tents inside the room. There were only 2 sleeping bags inside each tent so they all agreed to sleep in the same tent so nothing happened to them. They took snacks out of their bags and ate them before going to sleep.

Before they go to sleep they decide to play truth or dare since they got  bored. After they finish playing truth or dare they all get tired and go to sleep. Before Erica goes to sleep she gets worried and scared that someone might come inside the house or is already in the house and wants to kidnap them. Erica gets really scared so she decides to wake Emily and Rachel up and tells them that she’s scared and doesn’t feel right about this place. Rachel calms her down and tells her that nothing will happen so they all go back to sleep.

 

Chapter 1

Rachel noticed something unusual, and her face went pale after seeing this weird creature, this creature is every child’s nightmare!

The three girls; Rachel, Emily and Erica went to tell scary stories in the woods, like they always do. They were busy telling scary stories, trying to scare each other. Rachel was the first to notice the tremendous, terrifying paw that was imprinted in the soil. Rachel’s face went pale while screaming in terror.

Rachel; the main character with brown hair, blue eyes and is the eldest friend she is 15. Erica has green eyes,blonde hair and is the second eldest friend she is 13. Emily; Rachel’s best friend, brown eyes, black hair youngest friend shes 11. The one and only the mysterious demon creature that looks and acts like the devils pet

They plan to go to this terrible place that they see in the woods. It makes them want to go there because they were telling scary stories and then they see these strange footprints that weren’t theirs or any normal human footprint. It looked like a creature’s footprint… a strange creature

They start off in the woods in the shade, telling scary stories then Emily  notices a bright light which she thought was the end of their lives. She warned the others and then her friends came running to her and noticed the light too. Rachel and Erica tried to calm Emily down and tell her it wasn’t the end of their lives and it was just some strange ordinary light. Erica went inside to prove to Emily she was wrong.

 

Chapter four – The last part.

When the crazy cats came over they chucked a small skinny black cat to guard the boat . They had a little pier so he could stand on it and not have to keep swimming round. After they all huddled up Mickey went outside to check if the cat was still there. He walked right to the edge and peered over the edge. The small skinny black cat was fast asleep. Mickey ran back in the room and whispered “The black cat is asleep”. Bugsy “ Jumped up and said “Yes now we need to get out.”.

Busgy whispered “ We need to get out, and I have a plan, does anyone have a rope”. Mario and Minnie both looked at Mickey as soon as Bugsy finished her sentence. “ I have a bow tie on my map that my father gave to me,” said Mickey. Bugsy’s ears went down and her eyes filled up with water so she said to him” We won’t use that but are you good and giving boosts”. Mickey shook his head. Mickey got his map out and took the red string off it and said “ What do we need to do”. 

After they set it up they heard a big bang. Mario bit a hole in the box to see what it was. When he put his eye against it he backed up and shouted “ GUYS HAVE A LOOK AT THIS”. When Mickey looked through he saw a big dog so he called Bugsy over. She looked through the whole and said to herself “ Pablo “. Then she Shouted to the three little mice ” He’s here to save us”. Surprisingly, he put his hand in, grabbed them out and put them on his back. Then he booted the black cat into the ocean and it died.

When they were walking to the safe place Mario and Minnie both said “ Thank you for saving us”. The Pablo the dog stopped and replied to them with “ It’s my pleasure” then carried on walking. Minnie smiles with pleasure. Bugsy pointed to a brown sloppy thing and said “what is that?”. Mickey said “ I think it’s cat poop”. There were rocks everywhere, there was wood everywhere.

In the distance they spotted the safe place . So Pablo started running to it so they would be safe. When they got to the castle Minnie said “ It’s not what i expected it to be like “. It was Big and tall, grey and dull; some of it is black and dark. Pablo whispered to Mickey “ I know it’s not nice but you can stay here for as long as you like and I have a room for each of you mice ” . Mickey looked at him and whispered back to him “ It might not look nice on the outside but on the inside it’s going to be beautiful and thank you for everything “. They walked inside and Mario said to Pablo “ Your place is beautiful i wanna stay here forever. “ So they all got settled in and was happy.

After they all got settled in they heard a big bang. “ BOOM” it went and everyone looked outside. The big rock hill round the back of the tower fell down and the rocks were coming for the castle. Everyone was running madly round packing their bags getting ready to leave.

When they got outside Minnie shouted “ Polo and his army , Polo and his army”. They looked to the right of them and polo and his army was coming to save them. Mario noticed  Buggy and another rabbit going on a boat so he said to Minnie and Mickey “ Come on,”. When they got round the corner he shouted “Wait and we come please”. The rabbits nodded so they got on the boat.

Mickey looked back at the Island and said to the others” Polo’s army is beating up the crazy cats by chucking rocks at them”. Everyone laughed. “Where are we going?”, asked Minnie. The other random rabbit replied with “ Where going to the lost island.”. Mario and Mickey looked back at the Island and asked why? Bugsy answered them with “ If they kill the crazy cats they will come to this island and the crazy cats won’t come here because it’s going to be dead.” Minnie nodded to them and then said to them “ Ah”.

Suddenly, the boat stopped rowing. Mickey asked “ What’s wrong?”. Bugsy replied with “ I don’t know but we’re going to have to swim for it.”. Minnie cried” Aw i’m wearing some of my best clothes, but oh well,”.  So they started swimming. Then they heard a buzzing sound. They turned around and a boat was hedging their way so they all shouted “ STOP, WERE DOWN HERE,”. The boat stopped next to them and Polo was on it so he helped them up . Then he said “ Let’s roll,”.

On the rest of the way there it was a very bumpy flow for the water. Polo told them to get used to it. “ Where are all the others? ” Mickey asked Polo. “ They’re building the island back up again so we can go live there again.”. All the kids were shouting yes. “So that could be ages into the future”. Bugsy, Minnie and Mario asked politely. Polo nodded his head slightly.