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The rusty bike

The old bike leaned

against the ancient tree

sitting patiently

waiting to be cleaned.

The rusty spokes sat

waiting  to spin

framed by tyres

which we’re worn and flat.

The bent seat

peeled every minute

being strangled by lush veins

and has no heat.

The cracked handlebar

like a broken bone emerging from the flesh

that hanged off like nothing

that didn’t go very far.

 

 

 

 

The bicycle

The bikes wheel

an old crusty wheel.

 

Its black and popped

bent and wholey.

 

spins like noodles

dirty as mud.

 

Its been here for 4 years

hid in the bushes.

 

It doesn’t work

all soaked and wet.

 

little pieces off paint started to peal off

cobwebs all around it.

The bike

The bike lay on its old friend,

rusting away like a dead body.

The handle bars still,

like a trunch of  a tree.

The paint falling off,

like dead skin.

The wheels is as useless,

as a car wheel frame.

The bike is old,

like a adult turtle.

The brakes are as useless,

like a broken pipe.

The pedals are as hard,

as a piece of gold.

The Old Bicycle

The bike, once new with silver handle bars glinting proudly in the sunlight

now stands

alone

Quiet.

Wheels still and chain rusted.

Dreaming of adventures long expired.

Roads past and fields crossed.

Wheelies once attempted by brave generations of children long since grown.

Scary feelings of small children trying to ride without falling.

Falling like the golden autumn leaves.

Balanced yet unconscious as the years pass with

steady hands gripping tight.

 

It waits.

An old rusty bicycle waiting..

Leaves covering it..

It sinks into the soil each second.

And each minute.

It wonders if someone will ever find it..

It rots each second wondering if someone will come and see it.

The bike waits.

And waits.

The Tireless Car

The Tireless Car

The tireless car had no tires and always slept.

The tireless car always lives in sadness and waits to grow his tires.

The tireless car awaits for a engineer, for someone to help.

The tireless car had no friends and happiness

 

 

 

The rusted bike

The pedals creak ,

against the old ,broken tree.

Its handles burnt in the hot weather ,

your hands are hurt when you touch the metal .

The rubber wheel rubs against the grass ,

Peices of the rubber fly off whilest you ride it .

The paintwork peels off ,

like dry skin .

The oily chains rubs against your legs ,

whilest the oil drips off and the chains break .

The rusty bike

The old bike leaned

against the ancient tree

sitting patiently

waiting to be cleaned.

The rusty spokes sat

waiting  to spin

framed by tyres

which we’re worn and flat.

The bent seat

peeled every minute

being strangled by lush veins

and has no heat.

The cracked handlebar

like a broken bone emerging from the flesh

that hanged off like nothing

that didn’t go very far.

 

 

 

 

The rusted bike

The pedals creak,

against the old, broken tree.

Its handles burnt in the hot weather,

your hands are hurt when you touch the metal.

The rubber wheel rubs against the grass,

Pieces of the rubber fly off whilst you ride it .

The paintwork peels off,

like dry skin.

The oily chains rubs against your legs,

whilst the oil drips off and the chains break.

You are

you are a young joyful child playing in the swaying,strong wind.

you are spongebob squarepants living in a exotic pineapple

you are a vicious wild tiger roaring at a swift undangered deer