Long, long ago Polly found the most beautiful shell.Carefully bent down to pick up the shell.To her amazement, she found beautiful shells, curved colored shells which glistende in the sun.
Suspense Paragraoh using colons,semi colons, hyphens and parenthesis
As I looked out over the deep, dark water I saw three gloomy objects rising from the depths of the ice-cold water.a shiny emerald,a magical treasure chest but the… the key slides in (to the treasure chest and the chest opens.) The high-pitched wind:side as it is going past.
Chapter 3
One day, I love New York reading fresh air and all the plants. I sat down to have my sandwich but small had ran off so I ran around looking for him until I heard a familiar roar. It was small. I sprinted through the words there was standing near me from school. She was screaming my secret was out. What am I going to do straight away Lily may scream”h..h..help!”I shouted” small stop!” please stop. I told Isla she was so upset.” we have to move her” she said…
writing in past tense
Writing in Past Tense
Something was crawling up the side of the skyship’s wooden hull. Ty, whose face paled, shrunk back and ducked down behind the tiller but Mariana rushed to the edge and peered into the gloom below. She could just make out something or someone scramble up the side of the ship. It was quite small and had green eyes. It paused and stared back at her. “It’s a baby dragon,” she called, “and it’s hurt.” Mariana, whose brows frowned with concentration, reached down and gripped its outstretched paw and pulled it onto the deck. “It was hurt in the storm.”
The dragonlet was shivering cold and whimpered. Ty dashed off to fetch a ship’s blanket and wondered anxiously if the dragonlet’s mother was pleased to know if they helped her baby. Mariana spoke calmly to the baby, hoping that Captain O’Shea wouldn’t take a dim view of what they had done
The magical creature
One morning the siren went off my mum with a tear in her eye she “screamed pack your bags!”still fighting I packed my bag not knowing what was going on .when I finished packing my bag mom gave me this gas mask She said to put it on and took me to the train station, she gave me the biggest kiss ever in the history of kisses and of course a hug. I could barely breathe as I waved goodbye a tear to driped down my face.when I arrived, in lowerstoft a young lady called Isla picked me up and took me to her house. She was very kind she said My room was upstairs and not to go inside the door that was shut. But I was too curious, so I went in Inside it was damp and the floor was wet and there There was rat poo all over the floor and pipes were leaking and A cobweb in every corner until I got to a big cage….. There was a creature standing in a cage. It was humongous it had sharp claws and big teeth and large blue eyes immediately I ran away.
The next couple of days,Isla took the creature into the deep dark wood. Nobody dare to go in there.
Letter home
Dear mum and dad,
I hope that we are wining the war.Also thanks for the lovely jam sandwich I ate it instantly, it was delicious.wen we left I started to cry but quietly so Idid not dusterb any one .After what seemed like days,we finally arrived at Coventry .
We went to the local school and stood in a room and got picked by people.I got picked by a young lady called Lilly may she was really kind .she gave me a bath and dried me of ,she helped me get dressed then gave me a cup of tea.After that,I went to bed,I found it very comfortable
In the morning,I walked to school with Lilly may she doesn’t mind if I call her mum, so I do. When I got there, we learnt how to write that is how I am writing to you.Then it was lunch, We sat on the Benches with my friend Rosie, she is really funny. After a while, I went to the bathroom. The smell made me feel sick.. After I got home, I read A book called stick dog It was really funny, My favourite character was poo poo. well, goodbye for now
Love from Ella
conjunctions
Bob ran down the road but he fell over.
The thunder road. As the hobbits hid.
Bilbo slept in a cave and the goblins attacked.
The cart came to a wheezing halt. As gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.
Jim was interested in the idea and he rang his friend.
Owls are nocturnal .which means they are active and have excellent eyesight.
Image Poem
The plant of light
is as bright like New York at night
city lights.
inside outside
Inside,the fire was popping red.
Outside, the snow was falling gently.
Inside, the pen was squeaking loudly.
Outside, water splashed gracefully.
Inside, the pillow was as soft as a cloud.
Outside, the grass waved in the wind
Image peom
A tree is as spiky as a hedgehog, like a prickly bush. Life giver.
A flower is as beautiful as a rainbow, like soft cotton. Wonderful smell.
A sun is as hot as a mug, like burning your hand. Fire ball.
An ocean is as quiet as a child, like paint was spreading. Vast blanket
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