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Motorsport emporium

 

They all went out. I didn’t know what to do, I just followed my natural instinct and planted my throttle all the way to the floor like the start of one of my go kart races. But then I suddenly realised where and what I was in. I was in a 1994 formula one car and bombing up to the corner at what seemed like I was at spa. One of the most famous racing tracks in the world, at over 7 kilometers long you can reach speeds of up to 223 miles per hour. But before I knew it I was at … the first corner on the track. After safely avoiding all of the traffic, I Hurtled down towards e rouge but there was a problem and there was debris all over.

 

I tried to avoid it but I just couldn’t and got a puncture. Now flying towards a tyre barrier at over 200 mph barley any steering worked and I just prayed it would turn it time meter after meter getting closer and closer it eventually gripted in and turned away from the old tyre barrier luckily the pits was only 200 metres away now would I make it or would I not closer and closer I got getting closer but then… 

the door

As she opened the mysterious cupboard door, Emma noticed someone was approaching her. She quickly opened the door the rest of the way then grabbed whatever was in there and ran…

 

The more she ran the faster she got. Without any hesitation she ducked under a table and watched 11 people run by then she looked down at what she had found. Emma was shocked.

 

She had found:

 

  • A bag of diamonds;
  • A tube of penies;
  • A £100 note X3;
  • A mysterious key;  

 

She had noticed there was a door to her left. Maybe this key unlocks the door so I can get back home. Emma walked over to the door….

Chapter 3

He stepped not into a room but into a beautiful majestic land full with different types of animals being friends. The sun made a spotlight on a unique animal that had the tail of a tiger,the head of a red panda and the body of a leopard. It was some sort of hybrid.

The strangest thing was that it was the animal that she drew in the book.without thinking of the consequences Jack went into the thatch cottage that he drew in the book .

 

Chapter 3 

 

The cottage had a thatch roof,a stone path decorated with flowers,a hedge in the shape of a leopard and a garden decorated with a pond and a fence.The fence was open so Jack let himself in it was dark gloomy but felt welcoming it was totally different to its appearance outside.The house was empty no sofa no kitchen and no stairs.

 

“Hello” shouted jack but he was met by a deathly silence.He pulled himself up the non existent stairs.when he got there he heard a pot fall over .Jack clambered down the hole and saw a ghost it had blood red eyes.Jack immediately ran outside and closed the door but the ghost ran through it.

 

“COME BACK” a voice hissed Jack ran to were the door was but it had disappeared,all the animals had hid except the hybrid… 

 

The Emporium

Inside the emporium, Daisy and Julien were cautiously looking around at all the things there were in front of their very own eyes. There were cages hanging from the roof, broken popcorn machines ( at least a dozen ) and the feeling that somebody was watching them. The walls were painted white, with red stripes making it look like the outside of a circus tent. The thing that Julien couldn’t get his head around was how there were no balance beams, or anything to support it and keep it standing. He didn’t let it bother him though, there was too much cool stuff to explore.

 

The emporium had no light, and the children could only see because they each had a torch. They couldn’t believe it was so spacious and how it took up a vast amount of land, but maybe they hadn’t knocked it down. ‘Hey Julien,’ Daisy called. ‘Come look at this!’ It was a maze that led outside. It looked so fun, but yet so big. ‘Wanna go out this way instead of the way we came in?’ Daisy asked. Without hesitation or thinking about it, Julien quickly answered ‘Race you to the end. The loser has to do our homework, all of it,’ The pair shot off, Julien taking an early lead in ‘The Homework War’. 

 

The pair kept talking to each other, teasing to be precise. I’m winning, I’m closer, this maths homework is going to be hard for you. Things like that just kept coming out their mouths, each one determined to win. Then, their torches stopped working. The joy was swept  away from them, and it was replaced with fear. They didn’t know what to do, they were lost, but the worst thing was it was dark and they were separated…

Chapter 2 The Room

All Gerard could see is a dark oak door looking at the cracks starting to look like they are sharpening so they could kill someone  Gerard touched the sharp wood starting to bleed with blood make one drop to the floor one at a time with a loud splash. Suddenly he heard a echo coming up the door.

The nowhere emporium

The nowhere emporium

 

There are places where no human would dare to go just like the nowhere emporium.

 

Even though haunted places are supposed to be scary. Even though haunted hallows dance in the moonlight. Even though you see scary things out of a horror movie. Even though you can smell your dream donut. Even though the sun is a massive star, like a smile filled with joy.

 

Even though everyone never entered. The door was small and intriguing. It was as if the nowhere emporium was trying to keep you away because nobody ever entered that was until Joanne.  

 

Part 1

 

People often wondered what was inside but nobody wanted to find out except for Joanne. On a rainy day, she went for a stroll down the street named Oak Crescent when she saw a neon glow coming from the nowhere emporium. With a bit of courage she slowly wandered into the nowhere emporium.

 

She took a good look around her and she was astonished at what she saw. Firstly, she saw haunted hallows dancing in the dark. She then smelt the best smell ever. It was her dream doughnut ( a custard doughnut) . She went over to see it and it looked so delicious she took a piece of it. In the corner of her eye, she spotted a dull book but with closer examination, she saw it was no ordinary book. Without warning, she realized the pages then began to turn.

the secret boutqiue

Even though at halloween the horror  was enough to scare a dinosaur into hiding bobby wished for more  she wished to go in the mysterious boutique no one had entered even from his mothers time well that’s what he heard he wanted to be the first in years to enter this ancient place

 

His mother had often warned him of the horror it laid but Bobby never believed anything she said, not since Paris anyway. But once he had entered, regret filled his lungs and sorrow filled his heart… the first thing he saw was an onanimous owl staring back at him alive but withering away with age he also saw an ancient emerald lost in time. Sweets filled with the souls trapped in the shop by then he was freaked out but something wanted him to say a force stuck in his soul. Then he saw the scrolls, an ancient scroll something dragged him to read it. He was just starting to read when the owner (who looked 2000 years old) said “ahem just what are you doing here”….

The Emporium

Nobody ever went near the Emporium. There were rumors that there were Kobras within its walls, spirits within its darkest blind spots and a big black hole that people in the past had tried to fill. Allegedly, your darkest most secret secrets were somewhere within its 100 radius, but many people believe it to be fake. Nobody ever dared to enter the Emporium. People believe that if you enter it you won’t live to tell the tale. 

 

You could tell by the door that it had never been moved, and that it had been still for hundreds of years. The windows were untouched and the frames were only a little rusty. You could tell that nobody had ever been inside, but Daisy and Julien were about to make history.

 

The Emporium

Elizabeth  had never been through the door and she had always been suspicious of what was behind it. Even though her mum said not to go through doesn’t meen Elizabeth couldn’t go through it. She enters a magic world and tragedy happens.

 

Chapter 1                                                                                             

Elizabeth had always been curious on what was behind the door for all her years but today was the day she went through it.Elizabeth stedally walked up to the shop door and started to slowly open the door, as the door started to creek open  she had a quick glimpse of the shop she walked in on her tiptoes and tried not to get caught because she was sneaking in .Elizabeth stood in shock thinking why she had never been in here before there were a huge map on the wall and a oak shelf that held glass bottles with pirate ships in them.Strangely,Elizabth saw little people waving back at her in the bottles  but she thought she was hallucinating so she carried on to explore the shop.There was 1 thing that caught her eye and it was a book which looked old.Elizabeth simply blew the dust of the book and then she started to open it.

 

‘I see you have found my book, you shall never open that’ Elizabeth stared at the man as he walked down the staircase. He had the most hazelnut eyes anyone could imagine and he also wore a brown coat which was matched with some denim jeans and shoes.

The emporium

Even though the lights still shined brightening up the street. Even though the fresh buns were baking. Even though the toys stood like statues. Even though the laptops were switched off. Even though the salty you could smell in your nose. Still no one ever entered this shop.

 

Chapter 1

 

Max’s  mum always told him never to go to the emporium by himself. He was walking down door road, which was the name of the road the emporium was on, when he noticed something didn’t seem right.

 

Max walked in the quiet emporium and saw loads of dust. If he had the chance he would buy everything in the shop. He saw an old xbox 360 waiting to be used. He walked his way around noticing there was no one in  the shop which was very unusual. After that, he went to the jewelry aisle. He looked at a beautiful antique necklace and picked it up and stared at the blood red ruby. The silence around him was unbelievable; he could not hear anything but time passing by. Then he saw a mysterious door never seen before…